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Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - elementaldeity on October 08, 2005
    This is so good. Marcus is a real piece of work. I really hope he gets his cummupance. One question thought, in chapter 14 you stated that Severus couldn't marry Hermione for reasons he wasn't going to reveal to Marcus. What are they? Will we find out eventually? Or is that something that is meant to be open ended? I'm not expecting an answer to the question itself, because I know that you are most likely setting up another scene somewhere else. But I wanted to make sure that I had not missed it somewhere in the previous chapters or that it will be covered in greater detail in the future.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 08, 2005
    Just me again! Two points to Severus!! Marcus needs to check out some books on anger management. You know I imagine he would have made a good death eater... if only perhaps not sharing on their philosophy... but it doesn't really seem that Marcus is a man for causes or principles... which would have made him dangerous even in Voldemort's eyes.
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 08, 2005
    I shudder to think of the damage Marcus could do to Hermione if that is what he did to his office.

    Hmmm, supper eh? Un peu de chocolat, peut-etre? I hope they get it on but I bet Ms Figg has other plans?
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  • From ANON - mayken on October 08, 2005
    Wow, your really writing up a storm, four chapters in a hit again.
    I think your muse much be sniffing something major.
    this storyline all of them are great, the story is catching and at the moment is one of the small few I keep coming back to see if they are updated.
    keep it up I'm hooked..
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 08, 2005
    I see I didn't miss the reason why they haven't married...good I thought I was forgetting.
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 08, 2005
    Yup, Marcus jsut doesn't get it (the connection between Hermione and Snape) and I don't think he ever will. Hermione has made a bit of a mistake in her naivete and this is going to cause problems, I'm afraid. I can't remember who reviewed and said they should have ironed these things out earlier in their relationship and I agree with them on that. But then at the same time, Hermione had never been in a relationship before and maybe, only maybe, can be excused for that reason. It certainly would have eased this mess.

    Did I miss the reason why Severus can't marry Hermione? Is that yet to be explained?
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on October 08, 2005
    i absolutely love your stories! i found the link on wiktt. normally i don't leave comments for authors, but i do so want you to finish this! good job!
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  • From ANON - bella28 on October 08, 2005
    Damn, that was good. Marcus is a great character, but he is in way over his head. Doesn't he know not to poke a snake.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 08, 2005
    Here I am again! WOW! Severus is gonna smear Marcus across the floor of the grimy Hogwarts dungeons. Marcus is quite an ass at times, but not in the way that Snape can be... both are in the wrong. Quite frankly I hope Hermione stomps both thier asses!
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  • From ANON - anon on October 08, 2005
    well, well, well...that was quite a confrontation hey?
    is it wrong for me to want severus to break his promise to hermione and duel marcus to the death?
    even though the tension is killing me, i really want you to draw this one out.
    fantastically written as always.
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on October 08, 2005
    Wow!!! WHAT a chapter!

    I'm a bit concerned that Hermione wanting to willingly fuck Marcus might make her seem a bit out of character with her intellect, however. No doubt the illustrious Ms. Figg has tricks up her literary sleeves to get around that.

    And of course we're all waiting on tenterhooks to discover the mysterious reason why these two haven't jumped the broom together yet!
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  • From ANON - Koda on October 08, 2005
    My thoughts? Marcus is a douche. Sev acted how Sev is..well.. supposed to act, but Hermione obviously is sick of that. :\
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 08, 2005
    Ch.14 - Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I love it! That's all I can say! I FREAKIN LOVE IT!!!!! It was perfect, just as I imagined!!!! Oh, and the part with hermione too at the end...... also perfect!!! It willmake the struggle to get her back all the more difficult! Woooooooooo hooooooooooooooo! I hope you update again soon! Toodles!
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  • From ANON - JW on October 08, 2005
    Ch 14 - wow! By the end of the chapter, I was back in Severus' corner, wanting to push him to go TALK to Hermione. Had to laugh at "She had been reading a book on making relationships work" - too bad she hasn't gotten to the part about how she can initiate "talks" with Severus, instead of waiting for Severus to open up. And I'm really curious why he hasn't married her yet. Other favorite lines from your pen: "homework nazi," "Why buy the niffler if you can get the gold for free" (heh!), and "Deatheater vs. Eradicator. It would be a glorious, if short battle." C'mon, Severus! Take her on a date!!

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  • From ANON - angel on October 08, 2005
    man you really need to open up severus ... man i love it more more i need to know that will happen next and in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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