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Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 08, 2005
    I'm dying to know what happens next! So brilliant! Once again I waited all day at work to come home and read this fic, and once again you haven't disappointed. Bravo and thanks for making my day!
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 08, 2005
    Ch.13 - DOH! Again you stop just when I'm eager for more more more!!!!!! Muahahahahaha! I LOVE IT! Brilliant! Cliffhangers are always the best at these parts of the story!!! Oh, and Snape's little comment that they aren't going to kill each other..... yet..... well it was gosh darn perfect in my book! And her hands tingling too? Oooooooooooooo weeeeeeeeeeee!!!! She is sooooooo in love with Snape it's funny, haha! And Snape is sooooooooooo in love with her it's more funny! HAHAHA! Sigh... love is such a beautiful nasty piece of work, hahahahahahaha! Well it is, seriously..... it's the most precious and yet the most dangerous thing in the world!

    I am still admiring how you make them test each other though. They want to be together soooooooooooo bad again but they are doing the right thing by "taking a break" until they can BOTH mature a little. Not just Snape, but Hermione too. She has a lot of things to learn. It wasn't entirely fair that she blamed the enitre rape thing on Snape, well the consequences afterwards anyways. Yeah, she was abused in a way, but Snape isn't the only one who needs to mature here. So I'm glad you are exploring that as well.

    And Marcus just reminds me more and more and more of that creep I dated last year. Seriously, it gave me goosbumps. I was thinking, ooooooo if I was Hermione I would hex his balls right off then shrink his penis into nothingness! Maybe THEN would he learn to think with his REAL head! HA! But, alas, that is just my wish, hahahahahahaha! I wish I could have done that to Mr-someone-I-hate-from-my-past...... so yeah. Well I hope you update soon! Im actually taking time from writing my fic to read yours! lol! It's ok though, because I'm having writers block right now, so anything to clear my thoughts is wonderful... and this story is indeed wonderful to read! Keep it up! Toodles!
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  • From ANON - anon on October 08, 2005
    aaargh! will this tension ever stop?
    i can't get enough.
    i feel somewhat ah...*responsible* to warn marcus who he is dealing with.
    -ooh, when will severus find out about marcus's dubious past?
    post soon.
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  • From ANON - JW on October 08, 2005
    Ch 12-13 - ooh, very interesting indeed! I like the idea of Hermione doing a bit to try to rile up Severus, so that's not just a passive observer of Severus-Marcus interaction. Also, she's the one with the dream of the dragon-serpent fight, so she has a vested interest in preventing warfare between the two. But Marcus is pretty "Slytherin" too, even though he didn't go to Hogwarts. VERY interesting character you've created!!
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 08, 2005
    Very interesting indeed. This could be a monumental duel and I really can't say who would win. Marcus is a very smarmy character. There must have been some innate goodness in him if he refused to take the contract to assassinate Dumbledore but I don't see him respecting anyone right now and that includes Hermione. In many ways he would have been a consummate Deatheater, he is remorseless, sociopathic.

    It will be interesting as well to see if Severus begins to treat Hermione with some softness when they have worked their way through their current estrangement. I know that Hermione feels she needs the roughness but does she need the brutality? It will be interesting to watch this story develop.
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  • From Ms_Figg on October 08, 2005
    Don't worry, Bronte, even though Hermione and Severus are on the outs, I have figured out a way to insert at least partial lemons to quench the thirsty...in a couple more chapters
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  • From ANON - angel on October 08, 2005
    wow ..... i wonder how long it will take mione to figuer (sorry i have bbd spelling forgive me ) what marcus is up to in time ... and hope mione and severus get back togethere soon i dont like to see him hurtting like this ...... well in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Koda on October 08, 2005
    Very, very interesting indeed.. can't wait.
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  • From ANON - bronte on October 08, 2005
    I wonder if Marcus will insinuate that his "relationship" with Hermione has progressed farther than it really has. And will Severus know that he's bluffing?

    Any chance for some lemons in future chapters? If not, oh well...this story is worth it, regardlesss.
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on October 08, 2005
    Go Snape! I'm really beginning to detest this Marcus! Great update! Write again soon, por favor! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Kisses,
    Killer K :)
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  • From ANON - Mswigglesworth on October 08, 2005
    I hate to say this, but I almost wish that Hermione is forced to use those fighting skills on Marcus. In your other story Severus let her off, and she had those charmed peices of jewelry. She does't see Marcus as a threat, and I think this is the biggest danger. I think she is going to learn the hard way that even though her situation with Severus wasn't going well, her current situation is not going to be any better.

    What she told Severus about their relationship she should have done years before. They should have discussed where they were going before. I think Hermione is doing just exactly what Severus had warned her about. I think she is wanting to spread her wings at the cost of hurting someone who truly loves her. I'm not saying Severus isn't partly to blame, but she knew what she was getting into he was honest. Now all of a sudden she decided things aren't going right and shuts him out.

    If you are in love with someone you don't do that. You talk things out and work things out. You don't go and flaunt yourself with other men. I am very disappointed in Hermione in this story.
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  • From ANON - cutie_berry on October 08, 2005
    ooohhhh... i'm curious as to what all three's next moves will be.... continue the great work! i'm loving every bit of it and really cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Koda on October 08, 2005
    Very interesting indeed..
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 08, 2005
    This is really going to be interesting because the two wizards have excellent insight into each other's psyche. However, I think Severus has a greater understanding of Marcus. Marcus underestimates Severus greatly while Severus seems to have Marcus pegged right down to the nth degree. Very nicely written.
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  • From ANON - Laura on October 08, 2005
    Oh, they're all so calculating! This is really an excellent story; or should I say *another* excellent story! I'm looking forward to the snake and the dragon facing off. Really well done. I see Severus rescuing Hermione in the near future...or maybe he'll have to rescue Marcus from her once his intentions are clear!
    Do you have anything published, MsFigg? I'd love to read more of your work- you really are good.
    L
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