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Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Stormi on October 07, 2005
    Chapter 10 - Good for Hermione. Hopefully, Severus will learn to grow with this and Marcus won't be able to weedle his way in. Nice chapter and am looking forward to the next.

    Stormi


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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 07, 2005
    Ch.10 - Wow, very dramatic. I LOVE IT! You know, at first I was really worried you were going to ive thema time out or a break, but actually I'm very glad you did now. It will give them both time to think and really understand what it is they want. Severus is going ot have to grow up and learn to open up his heart to her if he ever wants to make their relationship last forever. Communication is key yo every relationship, and I'm o glad you are using that as a main point here. A lot of SS/GH stories just put them together because they are both intelligent and they always have great sex, but they always leave out the part that they need to communicate intimately with their hearts, not just their bodies, to make it work. I am so glad you are getting them through this stage. It will be a struggle for them, but in the end it will be for the better. They will be closer than anything, and more in love undoubtedly.

    And Severus DOES know Hermione better than Marcus, and he will have no problem getting her back after she has her fling with Marcus..... because he really knows what her heart wants. Marcus only wants the hunt, as you said, and that is not going to please Hermy at all, in my opinion anyways. Sigh.... I am so glad you made them split up for now, it will really do them good in the end. Just don't mke it tooooooo long ok?! hahahahaha! I gotta have my Snapey and Hermy, hehehehe! Thanks for this wonderful story! Toodles!

    Oh yeah.... update soon again please!!!!!! muahahahahahahaha! I'm addicted.... *runs around in circles*
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on October 07, 2005
    NOOO!!! Ms Figg, you're killin' me, woman! Killin' me! Killin' the Killer K ! ! ! I am so happy you have decided to continue on! And even though you are K I L L I N G me I am loving this new twist in their relationship! Poor Severus! I can't help feeling sorry for the big dumb lug! But that was no way to treat poor Hermoine either! I just feel for them both! My heart just breaks for them!That is a real testiment to your great writing to stir such heartfelt emotion! Please update soon, I , like many other readers, I'm sure, can't get enough of your teriffic gift! Happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Torn,
    Killer K :{
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  • From ANON - JW on October 07, 2005
    Ch 10 - (feels woozy) whoa, that was a tough talk! He better start planning a first date. He already knows - from the day Draco tried to kill them - that she likes romantic picnics, window-shopping, that music station, and picking flowers, so he has info to start with. Go, Snape!
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on October 07, 2005
    *stares at computer with mouth open*
    I can not believe you did that....It was powerful and wonderful of Hermione. That is the Hermione she really is underneath her love and obsession for Severus. What a strong girl she is to do that. I am so happy Severus was devistated. Good...and a nice touch her rubbing Marcus in his face. WOW. I am oh-so-anxious now...but I can't read agian until monday....maybe I will have multiple chapters by then? Powerful stuff Ms_Figg.
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  • From ANON - anon on October 07, 2005
    dear god -the angst!
    i forsee a nice duel between severus and marcus...*yay*
    thanks for posting so soon.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 07, 2005
    Awww... my heart was breaking at that!!!! And I'm not Hermione or Severus (obviously) you have to update soon - please don't be cruel and make us wait!
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  • From ANON - Severessa on October 07, 2005
    Oh My God. I hope that Hermione is wise enough to know that pretty words does not a lover make, and that Severus is able to act quickly!
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 07, 2005
    Poor Severus. But really and truly he crossed over the line and was brutal in his treatment of Hermione. She is dealing with things the best way she knows how but she really doesn't have the experience to deal with Marcus...that's on Severus's shoulders also. You are once again weaving a powerful story. Thank you for sharing it with us and so quickly.
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  • From ANON - Tautriadelta on October 07, 2005
    Wow. I just got done reading everything, from 'What was I Thinking' to 'A Matter of Matrimony', and I am simply amazed. Congratulations on such a wonderful work of art. You've done more to capture the intracacies of human interaction than many professional writers. Please don't forget to put a disclaimer on here, as per AFF's new requiremtns, as I would hate to see this deleted. Brava.
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  • From ANON - DawnEB on October 07, 2005
    I really think you have Hermione doing the right thing as she sees it, and you have already shown that Severus realises he is wrong and needs to make amends. Just how much trouble and pain will you have Marcus cause them, I wonder?
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  • From ANON - angel on October 07, 2005
    ~sniff sniff~ man severus you just make his job easier man i cant wait in till the next chapter soooo on till next time keep up the awesome work later

    angel
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on October 07, 2005
    Way to go....that was an amazing thing you made Hermione do....I am so glad that she stood her ground. I can't say that I am not cheering for Marcus after the rape. I like him and it would be interesting to see him end up with Hermione .
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 07, 2005
    Walking away now. Too much angst for me.
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  • From ANON - WILDKATBLUE on October 07, 2005
    Well, that made me cry. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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