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Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Koda on October 07, 2005
    Sob. You made me sad.
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  • From ANON - kishkitten36 on October 07, 2005
    I have loved all of the stories in this universe. I eat up each chapter as soon as it's posted. And after this story ends, I hope you do yet another sequel.

    Marcus strikes me a someone who could easily become another Dark Lord if he put his mind to it. I wonder where he was during all the struggle and strife with Voldemort. What role, if any, did he play in the war? It's easy for him to sit there and think he is undefeatable when he didn't have to fight a Dark Lord and Deatheaters at every turn. I hope Snape can take his arrogance down a notch or three.

    Strong as she may be, I stil don't think Hermione fully comprehends the danger she is in from Marcus. He doesn't simply want her sexually, he's bordering on obsessed, willing to do anything to get what he wants. And Marcus is manipulative so, while she is thinking that he is being nice, in her anger at Severus, she will miss all the warning signs until it is too late. The idea of her being alone with him outside the castle is creepy. Cooling it with Severus for awhile is a good idea to stop the beginning cycle of abuse. But I think her decision to instantly break up with Severus and start dating Marcus, as a "friend" or not, is not the most intelligent thing to do. People always seem to make bad relationship decisions on the rebound or when their angry at a significant other and by time she realizes her mistake, it might be too late.
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  • From ANON - PurestBlood on October 07, 2005
    WOW, I realy love this fic so far. Poor Hermione:( I hope you update ASAP, I realy want to know what happens next in this story. :D
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  • From ANON - Jonathan on October 07, 2005
    Can someone be "deliciously wicked" ?
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 07, 2005
    Ooh Severus you dope! Tell Hermione how you feel!

    Jeez, men can be so uptight and dumb! Bless him though... he has been through a lot!

    Marcus is gonna get an ass kicking from me if he hurts Hermione - Severus and anyone else, will have to wait in line!

    I look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 07, 2005
    OOPS! I meant *snake* not Snale in the last review, hahaha! I meant even a dragon can be fooled by the sly coil of a snake! Sorry bout that, haha! You were prolly like wtf?! A snale? lmao!
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 07, 2005
    Ch.9 - Oh wow, what an arrogant bastard he is! Sheesh! Well now I have more faith in Snape and Hermione, because Hermione will see this side to Marcus and realize he doesn't love her like Severus does. Even as brutal as Snape and Hermione can be "together" Snape still loves her. He does it because he loves her. Basically, Marcus just wants some ass, hahahahaha, and he wants to prove he can take on anyone and get his prize. Arrogance always fails in the end, it makes people blind. Even a great creature like a Dragon can be fooled by the sly coil of a snale, muahahahaha! Snape may be arrogant in some ways, but he has his reasons. He has never been respected as much as he should be, and he's finally starting to lead a normal life with his perfect lover. He won't let anyone take that away from him, that's where his arrogance is... the right kind.... because he loves her.

    Well I hope I'm right about all this because I'd be very upset if Snape and Hermione don't end up together, or their relationship is damaged horribly because of this pompous Dragon. I would love to see them duel it out too, so I hope you put that scene in. It would be very entertaining I'd have to say! muahahahahahaha! And I love it how Dumbledore sticks up for Snapey, hehehehe! Ahhh... I just love it! Wow, I really AM a hopeless Severus fan! hahaha! MAn o man, I wish I had him all to myself. Oh well... I hope you update again! I envy how you update so fast. It takes me a while, blah! Toodles!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on October 07, 2005
    I'm not liking this situation at all. Marcus needs to end with extremem predjudice.
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  • From ANON - Koda on October 07, 2005
    I've got to run. Can't wait for their talk, though.
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  • From ANON - JW on October 07, 2005
    Ch 8-9 - well, they all have their points and reasons for their behavior. Severus told Hermione that Marcus wouldn't love her, although I don't know if she remembers that. I'm still not completely sure Marcus is incapable of love. I like your bit about Marcus refusing to kill Albus; it shows some honor in him. Will Albus confront Severus about what Marcus said - about not locking Hermione away, not marrying her all these years? Thanks for the new chapters!!
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  • From ANON - anon on October 07, 2005
    ch 9
    i can't believe i check for updates so often...i'm well and truly hooked.
    ooh, marcus is letting his intentions be known to all and sundry.
    -still, my money's on severus winning the girl. *please* let him win the girl...
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  • From ANON - anon on October 07, 2005
    wow, severus really pushed it that time hey? i wonder how marcus will take advantage of the situation...
    love your work.
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  • From ANON - Stormi on October 07, 2005
    Chapter 8 - Well writen. It was great to read both Hermione's and Severus's thought on what occured. I'm glad to see that Hermione is going to stand up for herself. Severus needs to learn that she won't tolerate being treated like that but that even if she has other friends, that it doesn't mean that she won't want him any more.

    Severus is going to be in for a rude awakening. He says he is going to let her decide but I won't be surprised if he starts putting his best food forward and starts quarting her. He may find the man in himself that he lost a long time ago.


    Keep up the great work and update soon.


    Stormi


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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 07, 2005
    Another great chapter... glad to see some of the mindset of Severus again. I really enjoyed your part about paradise, which I have to agree is true. People get bored with perfect bliss. For some reason humans tend to need a little chaos in their lives to know they are still living. Can't wait for the update!
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 07, 2005
    That was hilarious... I have to say I had an undignified snort at poor Flitwick's expense over that one. Continue!
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