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Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - angel on October 06, 2005
    man poor mione ..poor severus.... i hope she figures out what he mean soon and i hope then she will under stand why he felt like he had to clame her again like he did ...man poor poor severus ... in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel

    ps please update soon and thank you for the fast updates ~giggles ~
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  • From ANON - Miroku75 on October 06, 2005
    Great story! Great chapter! While not lemony, Snape's response to the threat of losing Hermione seemed in character.
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 06, 2005
    Ch.6 - Awwwwwww.....!!! That is so sad!!! Omg I really feel horribly for Severus! I never thought of him crying but I guess maybe he realized it's possible he could lose her. Wow..... that's very powerful. *snif snif* I feel very sad right now, I want to cry with him. Oh poor poor Snape *cries with him*
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 06, 2005
    Ch.5 - Oh wow, Marcus is quite serpent like himself. Hmmmmm...... poor Severus. He's going to lose the only one he ever loved.... uh possibly. NOOOOOOOOOOO! You can't let Hermione end up with Marcus, noooo no no no!!!! Ok, gotta read more....
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  • From ANON - lilly on October 06, 2005
    I love your story. Please continue and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Laura on October 06, 2005
    MsFigg, this is so good! I love Severus' jealousy....I'm looking forward to him tearing Marcus apart when he does something bad to Hermione. Can't wait for more!
    You really are a wonderful writer.
    L
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  • From ANON - WILDKATBLUE on October 06, 2005
    This was a very powerful chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. You do a really good job.
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  • From ANON - Addict on October 06, 2005
    Wow. And wow. I half thought Hermione was going to fight and run from Sev in that last scene. Very powerful. Get the lady some purple potion, please!
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  • From Snapelover11 on October 06, 2005
    Oh wow...I am stunned. That was a little freaky when he threw her on the bed and didn't even give her a chance. But she of course loved it. But...poor Severus. In his own way, he knows that Hermione is too young to even understand all the things that he does. How touching your lemon turned out to be. I do wish Hermione would grow up alittle. Geesh....tell Severus he has to marry her! Argh...I see some confusion for Hermione, heart break for Severus and possible wet dreams for Marcus. Please keep going. I think you did a wonderful job on this emotional chapter. Sorry you aren't doing well right now. :o(
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  • From ANON - Larissa on October 06, 2005
    that was intense...but necessary to the plot, I think. I'm kind of wondering about Hermione, though. For a smart women, she's kind of slow on the uptake. I know she's inexperienced, but it doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure out what's going on here.
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  • From ANON - McHell on October 06, 2005
    OK. Now, I'm hoping Hermione isn't too forgiving of what happened in this chapter. Yes, Severus maybe have been jealous and upset. Maybe enough so for Hermione to be declaring her love at the end of this scene. But, HELL! He was actually raping her this time. Maybe rape is a strong word. But still... he didn't care about her pain, about what she wanted, he wasn't listening to a damn thing. I hope you plan some time apart for them. As for Marcus...not sure of my thoughts on his yet. I'd like to see "something" between he and Hermione. And for Severus.... I'm curious to see what he's going to do. However, I think he needs to feel some sorrow and regret for his selfishness and his hurting of Hermione. He may love her, but he also sees her as HIS possession. Not cool.

    Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2005
    awww
    poor severus!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2005
    jebus. really makes you feel a bit frightened of him doesn't he? tell you one thing, i wouldn't want to be on the recieving end of severus's wrath.
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  • From ANON - anon on October 06, 2005
    i haven't read the next chapter yet, but i wanted to say thanks for posting so soon!
    cheers.
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  • From ANON - JW on October 06, 2005
    Ch 6 - "She saw his eyes were wet. He had been crying. Severus Snape
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