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Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - mary on October 06, 2005
    This is good! Poor Severus! He's jealous. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - anon on October 06, 2005
    Is it wrong for me to request another chapter, even when you've already posted today? :)
    Positively addicted to everything you write.
    keep it up!
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  • From ANON - JW on October 06, 2005
    Ch 5 - oh, he's good.... VERY good, very smooth, very tempting! I can't tell what is true and what isn't, but please don't do anything harmful to hurt those beautiful telescoping violet eyes! I'm really wondering what he was like as an Eradicator hit-wizard - he seems so skilled that he could easily and quickly kill someone, but the way he's messing with Hermione (teasing her mind with visions of dinner and dancing, etc.) I wonder if he "played" with his victims before he killed them. He's also "playing" with Severus right now, which is dangerous because it could honk off Hermione. Ooh, this is such a great story!!
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  • From ANON - septentrion on October 06, 2005
    this is going to be interesting. I can't wait to read the fight between Marcus and Severus. As far as Hermione choses Severus...
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  • From ANON - Jenn on October 06, 2005
    He is a very bad man....I am really goining to hate it when Snape transfigurers him. By accident, of course.
    I wonder what he will look like as a smelly wart on the back of a goat?
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 06, 2005
    That was a horrible thing to do... leave me hanging like that! I can't wait for the next chapter... your killing me, or more like torturing, but it's all the same I suppose. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 06, 2005
    The only thing I had to say about this chapter - wasn't Severus meant to be teaching a lesson? *shrug*

    But it was an excellant chapter, and again you have me on the edge of my seat waiting for an update!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 06, 2005
    ohhhhhhhhhh nooooooooo i hope snape dose not do something stupid ..... and i think mione should tell snape about her dream and tell him what delaluci told her about the fingure eight symbol.. well in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 06, 2005
    Muahahahahahahaha! It seems that Dumbledore doesn't quite trust this new black mystery either, eh? Well he shouldn't if this new black mystery is going to try and steal Hermione from Snape! Nooooooooooo! NEVER! I do hope you remember when you write this that it's a Snape/Granger fic, hehehehehehehe!!!! Meaning it's Snape and Hermy who live a long life together happily married with kids and awesome sex forever!!!! YAY! But this new character is quite tempting hmmm? It's like seeing chocolate when you are on a diet..... muahahahaha! But no one will ever be more choclatey than our main man Severus! Gosh.... no one will ever be quite a s delicious as him. *drools* I'm just a die hard Snape lover, hahahaha.... hence I'm married to him, haha! I'm just letting Hermione borrow him for a while, hehehe! Errrr..... riiiiight. So when is the next chapter?! Weeeeeeee! Ok, Toodles!
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 06, 2005
    Very interesting.... well, I'm definately on board for good! Please update again soon, can't get enough... I love a jealous Snape.
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  • From ANON - Addict on October 06, 2005
    Congratulations on the job. A good chapter, despite being lemonless. Why can I forsee a distinct lack of lemons on the horizon here? I get the feeling this story is going to have a lot to do with what's inside the characters' heads. Not that I'm complaining, all your stuff is good. Just promise us an 'explosive' ending, okay?
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 06, 2005
    Ch. 1 & 2 - WOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOO! I'm so glad you are doing this story! YAY!!!! I was so excited to see it on your profile thingy! This new character is highly intriguing! I LOVE him all ready, haha! He's like Severus yet more.... hmmm..... open? HAHA! I love the idea of an ex=assassin. Brilliant, just brilliant! So we have a former Death Eater and Order member claiming wonderful juicy little Hermy to himself and a new mysterious black bird of night with Severus-esqu qualities and a more charming appeal taking interest and duking it out for wonderful juicy little Hermy's affection too?!!! TOTAL GENIUS! Gosh..... if I was a man I would marry you!!! HAHAHA! Excellent excellent excellent!! BRAVO! Ok, 2 more chapters still! Weeeeeeee! Toodles!
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  • From ANON - brittany on October 05, 2005
    I love this story so much. It's entertaining and exciting. Could you e-mail me when the next chapter is writen?
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  • From ANON - larissa on October 05, 2005
    *nice* you do a good job of explaining inner motivations and drives. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - JW on October 05, 2005
    Ch 4 - ooh, a cushy receptionist gig sounds like a nice way to spend the day and make some money. And you can still write at night! I don't mind "only" one chapter a day - with most other authors, we're fortunate if we get a chapter a week. As for this chapter, I do like what is in Severus' mind. In Hermione's dream - did Marcus unconsciously send it to her? - both Severus and Marcus allowed her to choose between them, but she was afraid and ran. So if the dream is prophetic, that might mean that Marcus wants more than just a fling, or more than just breaking up S&H, which would really make him a serious choice for Hermione. Let's face it, the Eradicator background really is exciting and sexy! You're spoiling us with two hot men!!
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