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Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - anon on October 05, 2005
    I can't believe you've gotten another chapter up so soon. Another great fanfic with a very interesting plot. -On tenterhooks for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - JW on October 05, 2005
    Ch 3 - ??? Is Hermione going into Trelawney mode? Whoa.... Sounds like Hermione may be tempted by Marcus. If I may go into Trelawney mode myself, I would guess that a threesome with Hermione, Severus, and Marcus would NOT go well - the boys might want to out-do each other, and Hermione would be in severe need of purple potion. Hmm, then again, that might be good.... no, bad... no, good.... I think I'll let Ms Figg figure that out!
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 05, 2005
    Glad to have another chapter so quickly! I really do like dream symbolism, I know it's warned me as to coming "dangers" in the past. Lets hope Hermione finds her center before her world gets thrown off kilter. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - JW on October 05, 2005
    Ch 2 - whee, the story begins!! Hmm, does Albus still have the map showing where S&H are? Do S&H pre-arrange their "playdates" or does he just jump her whenever? I could see Marcus jumping Hermione while in Polyjuice form, or in Death Eater garb, then seeing how long it takes for S&H to figure out what's happening. (Of course, if Marcus is really bad in the sack, Hermione will figure it out too soon!) Does Marcus take "private jobs" from folks who want enemies killed - Gringotts or private parties? Ooh, I can hardly wait to see what you do with this story!!
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 05, 2005
    I love it! I was hoping that you would follow "The up against the wall war" quickly. Your new character intrigues me greatly. And I love a fic with a good romantic battle... so on with the show!
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 04, 2005
    I don't know where your story is going either but I like it. I'm looking forward to the next update...I think Severus is being underestimated by the DA professor...hehehehe.
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  • From ANON - LoveSpell on October 04, 2005
    Your stories are so good that it doesn't matter where they go, just as long as they go!
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on October 04, 2005
    As I am starting to write this, I am rolling my eyes because this is the third time in the past hour or so that I have had to tell you how wonderful you are and how much I enjoy reading what you have written. So what ever! I really love your new character. I think he will give Severus a bit of a run for his money. I believe Hermione will be her nice friendly helpful self and never see what hits her until it is too late. I hope she still has her charm bracelet!
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  • From ANON - Stormi on October 04, 2005
    Chapter 1 - Oh me, oh my, another bad boy. He sounds very intriguing. All kinds of interesting things can and do happen with your characters. Keep on writing!

    Stormi


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  • From ANON - lily on October 04, 2005
    I love your stories. I have been reading them off and on all day today. It took about five hours but it was well worth it. Please continue writing, you are awesome. I can not wait to read what you write next.
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  • From ANON - Holly on October 04, 2005
    Aha! A new beginning. I like it. (I knew you wouldn't be able to keep away from writing for long!)
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 04, 2005
    Looks like it'll be another FABULOUS story! Please, please continue it...I will definately continue reading it.
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  • From ANON - Larissa on October 04, 2005
    looking forward to seeing where this is going
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  • From ANON - Addict on October 04, 2005
    Ms Figg, you are a master at your art. I've all but stopped reading other writers these days- you give me all I need! And it's good to know that you're enjoying writing just as much as we're enjoying reading. It's rare to find an author who can produce as much as you do on a regular basis...at this rate, you ought to be writing whole books.
    Macus is a very interesting character, with definite possibilities. I like the vague 'little lost soul' thing he's got going on, and I'm so ready to read the clash between him and Snape. Something else, though...I've been dying for the staff to find out about Sev and Hermione's life together. Not the gory details, but this continued lack of understanding they have is frustrating.
    As for your question, is Marcus good for the Marriage story...Ms Figg, you have some of the best writing instincts I've come across, from bringing in new characters (like Eli), new spells and potions (which fit with canon, unlike some we read about here), to basic literary devices like denying us lemons (always leave them wanting more) (then give them more). Trust those insticnts- we'll love whatever you come up with!
    Thank you so much for writing! You're a treat!
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on October 04, 2005
    Sounds intresting,

    Keep going girl

    Sandra
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