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Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - beeky63 on October 04, 2005
    Oh yeah! A dark, dangerous man out to get Snape's woman. He won't take kindly to that.
    Toodles.
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on October 04, 2005
    I like him. Of course I do...I like Snape too! The "D"'s are attractive. Hmmm....unless Hermione found him attractive in some way...you know? Hemione could be considering the man's looks or no.....Severus sees in Marcus' mind that he wants Hermione. So many things could happen fromthere! We could see what a very jelouse Snape can be like! Very goo idea to introduce him to us now. So for the next installment, you don't have to cover all that! Nice Ms_Figg...very nice.
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  • From ANON - Catpower on October 04, 2005
    Oh Mrs Figg - you are just so prolific and such a good writer. I love your work but can't keep up! I haven't even started "the up against the wall wars" yet. Although I have bookmarked it as essential reading. Have you got a secret team of house-elf writers following you round all day, taking non-stop dictation? Or maybe just a quick-quotes quill that can be plugged into the USB port on your computer.

    Yes - Marcus is just my type. We clearly need to know everything about what turns him on, motivates him and adds interest to his life. Why isn't he a death-eater? Does he believe in good and evil or just who picks up the tab? Has he got a big willy? (sorry - animal instincts got the better of me for a mo).

    You keep writing, girl. It's what you're good at.
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  • From ANON - wolfen on October 04, 2005
    A most interesting character. I love it when Snape has a challenger. It always brings out the "best" in him. I can see the duel now...ummm. Yes, I think this is another excellent start. I'll be looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - anon on October 04, 2005
    please update this as frequently as you've updated your other works. i'm absolutely positively addicted to every word you write.
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  • From ANON - auntbecky on October 04, 2005
    Oh yeah! Bring on Marcus! Like JW says, not only would he make a great villian, but you could put him in his own stories. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Lady Silver Brooch on October 04, 2005
    A great introduction...if you are going to continue...which I hope you will.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on October 04, 2005
    I think that this is an excellent heavy, very much in the same vein as Severus but not as
    good. I do like his interest being piqued by Hermione and her favorite indulgence.
    I do wonder how he will die at Snape's hands?
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  • From ANON - JW on October 04, 2005
    Ch 1 - whoa, what a great character! I'm jealous of your ability to make an original character so highly defined and memorable in just the first short chapter. I don't think you necessarily need him for just the marriage story - he could be used in several plots. I wonder if Severus wasn't recruited for Eradicators because he had living relatives still, and if Marcus and Severus knew or heard of each other in school. Does Hermione still wear her charm bracelet and necklace? Marcus could be a sexy hot character, but we already have Severus for Hermione; and if Marcus turns out to be too evil, he might just need killing off. Hmm, keep Eli and Leaf Ear around, please! Next chapter?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2005
    oooo v interesting
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  • From ANON - anon on October 04, 2005
    fantastic start. got me hooked already.


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  • From ANON - luvssnape on October 03, 2005
    Interesting plot beginning. I wonder what Severus will do when he finds out someone is interested in his witch?
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