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Reviews for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - angel on October 10, 2005
    wow nice punch mione ... now snape get up make up a nice dinner for mione and ask her to marry you ...ok .. well in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - CloudySkieZ1 on October 10, 2005
    Call me a sick fucker but Marcus and Hermione...together....would have been freekin hot! Alls well that ends OK I guess. I still love me some HG/SS, though!!!

    Mo
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on October 10, 2005
    I would have hexed the fucker LOL. But I'm hoping he will get his in a worse way somewhere down the road.
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  • From ANON - JW on October 10, 2005
    Ch 21-22 - I just hope Severus gets a chance to remind Hermione of her words about never wanting to get married. Will Albus get to "talk" with Marcus? You sure you can't find Marcus a lady-dragon, so we can finally find out what "other" traits he inherited from his dragon ancestor? I wonder if Severus likes her go-go boots too.... Thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 10, 2005
    Way to go, Hermione. The bastard deserved it. I hope it doesn't heal properly.

    I know that Hermione thought of the relationship as loving but it was as I said before too one dimensional. There was the roughness they both desired but there wasn't the corresponding softness. I hope they can find the balance.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 10, 2005
    Ooooh yay.... I hope he doesn't mess up the proposal and Hermione better say yes - or she needs her head checked!
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  • From ANON - Laura on October 10, 2005
    That was very satisfying! I just wish Marcus had come out of it worse...:-)
    Looks like an engagement is on the horizon unless Hermione takes what Marcus said too seriously. Very well done- can't wait for more!
    L
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 10, 2005
    Ch.22 - YOU GET HIM HERMIONE!!!! LET THE MOTHER FUCKER HAVE IT GOOD!

    Ooooooooooohhh.... thank you for giving him a seconf blow!!! Oh man, that was freakin awesome! I laughed evilly aloud when she popped him in the nose again! Next, have her kick him in the balls and then shrink his package to nothingness permanently! He'll want to die! DING DING THE PERV IS DEAD!!!!! lmao!

    OMG! OMG! OMG!!! He's going to propse?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! *shrieks like a little girl and runs around in circles* OMG!!!!!!! YOU EVIL PERSON HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs*

    Ok, you aren't evil but oh my fucking gawd!!!! lol!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I'm dying with anticipation!!! AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I hope it will be beautiful!!! AHHHHHH! I'm so excited!!! Wow... I feel like one of my friends is getting married or something! hahahahaha! HURRY! Toodles!
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  • From ANON - PurestBlood on October 10, 2005
    LOVE it! AWWWW poor Sev, I hope he gets the courage to propose...Hope you update NOW...or later :D
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on October 10, 2005
    *chats... Go Hermione!...Go Hermione!...Go Hermione!*
    What a complete and utter asshole Marcus is! But you know...all that aside, I can see his point. In a very vague way. Someone as twisted as he is would interpret things that way, wouldn't he? he is what Severus could have been without Dumbledore and hemione, isn't he? Sad really. I hope he leaves Hogwarts. I also hope the proposal scene is everyhting all of out cumulative imaginations think it should be. Ohh...I simply can not wait for it! I know the end is near and once agian am anxios for it and saddened by it. You know what I like most about this one? The chapter titles. They are fantastic. You are so creative it is inspiring. I eagerly await another chapter....please hurry!
    *continues to chant...Go Hermione!...Go Hermione!...Go hermione!*
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  • From ANON - GriseldaMarchbanks on October 10, 2005
    Finally, Hermione sees the true Marcus. Cannot wait for her reaction...
    Keep it up!
    GM
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on October 10, 2005
    Revelations - Oh shit!!!! We are gonna have a dead man on our hands! Muahahahahahhahahahahahha!!! I couldn't help but burst out laughing, alongside Severus, when Hermione said "maybe I'll punch him in the face though" OMG that was perfect! hahahahahaha! Wooooo! Ok, I have to follow suit with another reviewer.... GO TEAM SEVERUS!!!! Kick hsi ASS Hermione! dooooo it! dooooo it! doooo it!!!!! *roots and cheers* Oh man...... and Snape's last reaction to, LMAO! No way in HELL is he gonna miss it! hahahahahaha!!!! LOVE IT my dear! Simply love it!!!! Sigh..... this story makes me go squeeeeeeeee! Next, it's a matter of maternity! muahahahahaha!!!! Well, I hope so anyways, hehehehe! Toodles!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on October 10, 2005
    I've just stumbled on your story and read all twenty-one chapters, thus far, in one greedy gulp. Nice little power play you wrote into it with Marcus (who is -- on the surface -- similar to Severus, so one could see the attraction). I've enjoyed it thoroughly, and can hardly wait to read your version of a Hermione thoroughly furious... especially when she goes after Marcus. In some ways she and Severus should thank him... I can't imagine that Hermione would ever be tempted away from Severus again.
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on October 10, 2005
    This is just bloody brilliant! Your best story yet! You have captured Snape perfectly with his possessivness and he would use sex to convey his emotions because he can't do it verbally. And as for Marcus the way you captured how the mind of a predator works (and we have all had to deal with one) is just brilliant.
    Sorry for not reviewing earlier although I have been following the story. It's Thanksgiving weekend here in Canada and things have been a bit hectic.
    Toodles.
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on October 10, 2005
    Wow. That was one kiss ass fight scene! I think Marcus is not quite up to Severus or Hermione's hand to hand combat skills! Even though he is good, he can not come inbetween those two. That's just asking for a brutal ass-kicking like we just saw. How Hermione must really love Severus for that. because he did open up to her and show her what he knew. And he showed her that even though he knew it, he was willing to allow her to take care of herself and respect her wishes. even though he was watching from afar. Then he opened up and told her everyhting she needed to hear in her moment of weekness. He has now proven that he is a friend to her as well as a lover. Perfect makings for a husband...if I say so myself. Later, she will understand what he was talking about when he said 'things concerning our relationship'. Marriage will undoubtebly come up then, won't it? I am foaming at the mouth to find out how Hermione will handle this little conversation with Marcus. I know you must be writing non stop to post so many chapters over the past few days, but really. I am waiting fr her ass kicking and for thier make up lemons! Ohhhh...a date too. Where he proposes to her! *does my happy dance* I can't wait! I am as addicted as any other readers here. I can't tell you how I love it.
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