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Reviews for Return of the King

By : wolfwalkerron
  • From ANON - JJ on January 21, 2006
    I've caught up. Now I understand why someone reviewed and hoped your arm would be better. I really appreciate how you wove the current British government into your story. I was wondering about those wards in the forbidden forest and now you've answered that question. I was wondering what you meant about Dumbledore. . . is he the first Black Mage? I'm really hoping you don't plan on sacrificing or torturing the King or Harry. I congratulate you. I was worried that with such a powerful Harry and Company you would not have enough of a story line to continue, a trap many novice's fall into. Not just writers, but gamers or role players too. Instead you upped the ante, very evily I might add. I can't wait to see where you go from here. The AU you created was so good, I was dissappointed to run out of story and return to my own life!!!! The mark of a truly well-crafted story.
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  • From ANON - JJ on January 19, 2006
    Oh my god!!!!! In two days, I have only read 6 chapters!!!! I'm fascinated with your world. I remember the first chapter but lost track of you after that. I didn't know what I was missing. All I can say is I wish I could offer you a plateful of my favorite cookies, oatmeal butterscotch, and a half gallon of milk. I'm looking forward to reading more!!! I may even have to move onto white chocolate chip walnut cookies!!!!
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  • From ANON - beca on January 19, 2006
    I must say I
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  • From ANON - Elleria on January 18, 2006
    I love this story. I'm so glad to see a new chapter. :-)
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  • From ANON - pagenwitch on January 18, 2006
    hey i like your story and want to see what you will do with it. cant wait for future chapters

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  • From ANON - Kristine on January 18, 2006
    now Harry needs a familiar. it would be a good time to bring Hedwig back, alive and kicking as a phoenix and have Fawkes turn up as well.
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  • From ANON - momoko on January 18, 2006
    good chapter, bye
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  • From ANON - Rayvenfire on January 18, 2006
    Yay you updated!!!!! I love this ff can't wait for the next chapter, update soon please.

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  • From ANON - Drow_Crazy on January 18, 2006
    Yes... You are back... I am so very glad..... I love your story and what you have done... Only have one thing to say.... The dragonling seemed to come from left field, by way of familiars. You could have gave us some kind of mentioning about familiars on the sly..... Other thatn that this story rocks and I can't wait for you to update.....
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on January 17, 2006
    I noticed that you posted a new chapter but you didn't go back and fix the mistakes you made in the chapter with Japan. I'm pretty sure my review is still but I just thought I'd repeat what i said, in case.

    The suffix, would be -SAN not -SON. And also for Harry because he is in a position of respect (Lord, royalty, chief, etc), he would be -SAMA. I really hope that you will make those changes because the way you have it now is incorrect.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on January 13, 2006
    I don't usually review as I never know what to say. But this story is amazing. So much detail must have taken forever. I really hope you continue it soon.
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  • From ANON - HUNTRESSS on January 06, 2006
    GODS AND GODDESSES THIS IS ONE EXCELLENT STORY!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - harryhollow on January 04, 2006
    I am so looking forward to your next chapters update!!! Please email me please when ever you get the chance i don't want to miss out on anything!!!
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  • From ANON - mello1 on January 02, 2006
    I have loved your story - it has so many unique elements. I am really looking forward to read more of it, lots more of it.

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  • From ANON - LNR on January 01, 2006
    This is an excellent story. I can't wait to read more. DO watch out for mixing up your facts. It was 20% not 10% to the Goblin managers, and Wormtail was killed off with the 50 DE's who attacked the first time.
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