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Reviews for Return of the King

By : wolfwalkerron
  • From ANON - Shinigami on November 19, 2005
    And I'm glad that Albus Dumbledore is NOT evil but I didn't expect the evil one to be his brother! Well at least Albus can rest in peace since now the entire world knows the truth...
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on November 19, 2005
    So when will you update this?! It's been almost a month! The last chapter's bound to get you lynched, since the end was another cliffhanger!
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  • From ANON - bellashade on November 19, 2005
    You have a continuity error with this chapter, in chapter 11 you said that wormtail was with the 50 that attacked toria and yet he appeared again in chapter 12.
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  • From ANON - roseymosey on November 16, 2005
    I am really enjoying this story. Hope you update soon.

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  • From ANON - Wraith on November 15, 2005
    Love it, keep going.
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  • From ANON - beca on November 11, 2005
    I do sincerely hope, this story will have an update very soon, my dear!
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  • From ANON - Savvy0331 on October 30, 2005
    Wonderful, wonderful story!!! I absolutely love it!. I hope you update soon so I can keep on reading. I have a suggestion for the Great Hall. I think there should be 8 tables instead of the old house tables. This would really promote getting along. Well done!!
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  • From ANON - lilywood on October 27, 2005
    Oh My God! This story is so good! So detailed. You really wrote a lot! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Echo on October 26, 2005
    Great chapter and story. Sad that it's the children that are always the victims. Unless it was a mistake, I don't believe a british soldier would knowing shoot a child. After all there are rules in civilized conflicts and they're not terrorist or evil incarnate like LV & his deatheaters. Publicity would turn their own people as well as the world against them (Not something a politician however idiotic would do ... maybe he was also tampered with ;p ). Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - ice owl on October 26, 2005
    Although this is a fun chapter you might want to check the restrictions on posting. I am pretty sure you are not allowed to use real people here in the fiction section.
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  • From ANON - Honor on October 24, 2005
    I really enjoyed the chapters so far, and hope we will see an update soon. Maybe we can have another lemon scene *hint. hint*

    BTW sometimes you have strange grammatical errors - words spelt correctly that aren't quite the right word, for example. Maybe you should look for a Beta / Pre-reader.

    Honor
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  • From ANON - ice owl on October 22, 2005
    That was cute...sent to Antartica to measure snowflakes!
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  • From ANON - Yana on October 22, 2005
    hahahahahaha poor Harry
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  • From ANON - Yana on October 20, 2005
    cool story
    i love it
    please will the next chappy be out soon
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  • From ANON - ladywatertiger on October 20, 2005
    I have enjoyed this fic very entertaining I look forward to seeing where this story goes.
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