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Reviews for Return of the King

By : wolfwalkerron
  • From ANON - ice owl on October 20, 2005
    Lovely chapter. So, is Hermione going to be put in a holding cell until everyone finds out what kinds of spells and blocks she has had put on her. That description was just too OOC for us Hermy fans. I'd like to see her fixed so that she can chase around the potions master, or maybe Draco!
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  • From ANON - lilywood on October 20, 2005
    I was so excited when I saw that you updated! Great chapter! Man, I don't like Hermione. She needs to get hers! Update soon!
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  • From InsomniackNixie on October 19, 2005
    I am so loving this story!! I'm hoping though that you haven't made Harry and co. so strong that no one can give them a run for their money in battle anymore. Just a thought, but if Albus crapped on HARRY'S life this badly, I wonder just how big of a dump he took on TOM'S life??
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  • From ANON - lilywood on October 19, 2005
    I just found this story and love it!! Please keep writing! I can't wait for Dumbledore to finally get it!
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  • From ANON - ice owl on October 19, 2005
    That was a beautiful chapter and well worth the wait.
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  • From ANON - CanadiangirlovesHP on October 18, 2005
    Awesome chapter.
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  • From ANON - momoko on October 10, 2005
    good chapter, who is Chan-son ?
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on October 10, 2005
    I just finished paying a visit to Wolfwalker's fanfic on another archive. Chapter 10 shocked the hell out of me! All I can say is Dumbledore isn't who he claims to be! Yes he is Dumbledore. But he's NOT Albus Dumbledore! And Hermione is offically unstable and in danger of losing her magic...
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  • From ANON - Dudley\'s Doormouse on October 09, 2005
    That was an inspiring chapter. I really liked the fact that Severus is now a free wizard and back in control of his house.
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  • From ANON - momoko on October 09, 2005
    good story, I like it, bye
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  • From ANON - Dudley\'s Doormouse on October 08, 2005
    Lovely. Chapters 4 and 5 were just splendid. I liked the touches of whimsey tucked in between all the serious stuff.
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  • From ANON - Bumblebee on October 08, 2005
    WOW - loving this story, evil Dumbledore is always fun to read :P Hope you keep up with the updating!!!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on October 08, 2005
    So far I like this fanfic, althrough when Fanfiction.net delated this, it was up to 9 chapters. So 5 chapters down, 4 to go..So far each chapter gets better and better...I got no problem with yaoi, but the love scenes makes me feel like a voyeur...But otherwise i love this, so don't change anything!
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  • From ANON - sbkar on October 07, 2005
    This is such a great premise, and you have so much potential in the story, but...the grammar and punctuation is a very big problem. You even drop the capitals from proper names...a big no-no. As caught by the idea as I am, reading the current version is heartbreaking to me. Every English and Liberal Arts teacher and professor I ever had would be crying at the sight.

    If you beta/edit yourself, I recommend two websites: 1) www.hp-lexicon.org for Potterverse spellings and facts, and 2) www.askoxford.com, a website of the Oxford English Dictionary with grammar help.

    There are so many things that a spell-checker in MS Word would catch as well as just having a dictionary by the computer. Invest in White & Strunk's Elements of Style and you will improve your grammar, sentence structure, dialogue, and punctuation immensely.
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  • From ANON - fragonknight01 on October 06, 2005
    Yo! Albus rocks! Maybe he and Corny can share a cell?
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