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Reviews for Amphitrite

By : AndreaLorraine
  • From ANON - bareb burke on October 01, 2006
    Thank you so much for continuing your story. I've followed it right fom the start and I must say that I especially like the setting and Lucius . Of course I love Severus so I am extremely excited . Thank you. Love, barb
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  • From ANON - GothicTemptress on July 27, 2006
    *CLAPS* Another wonderful chapter!!!! I'm sorry that I am just NOW getting around to it. Damn internet!

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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfSilence on July 04, 2006
    I'm loving this story, you're doing great! I'm only on chapter four, but I am already laughing my ass off at Lucius.......quality humour! Great stuff, shall read the rest soon as I can!!
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  • From ANON - Bek Allen on July 02, 2006
    I am... thoroughly captivated :)

    The way you have weaved this story, flitting between third-person narrative for the world around him, and then Lucius' own perspective is just brilliant. I also love the way you've integrated Ancient Mythology, especially Greek. I do hope there is more to come, as I said, I'm completely hooked!

    Though... one thing irks me slightly. I'm not sure I trust Aratole and Nick. I just get this distinct vibe that they are going to spread discord amongst Severus and Hermione and Lucius and Dawn - who by the way is a brilliant foil for Lucius.

    Please update soon!

    Bek
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  • From Bravmiki on July 02, 2006
    This is so wonderfully original. I have really enjoyed reading it. (BTW when they were on the beach, I kept yelling at my poor computer - "Apparate, you idiots!" I suppose fear does stop one from thinking clearly at times.)

    I love the textured weave of this fic. Looking forward to the pantheon's upcoming antics.
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  • From ANON - Miepje on July 02, 2006
    What a great story! I really enjoyed reading it so far and I'm looking forward to future updates. Kudos!
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  • From ANON - Jonathan on June 30, 2006
    What a marvellous surprise to find an update to your story. I hope that you enjoyed your trip to Greece; did you find out there that the Mediterranean is tideless? In chapter 3 the tide would not have rolled in to soak Hermione and Severus ;-)
    Looking forward to further chapters!
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on June 30, 2006
    I love the story. However, *Which is my but* It is annoying when you go over to other languages. Could you not put the English version next to the orginal speech? A majority do not read French. I must confess not being to read English well. You see I am Dyslexic, so author's like yourself are to me amazing. But please remember, us readers who are not so amazing...I know you are posting the translations at the end of a chapter. Perhaps you should try it. Go on a language you do not know, and then read the translation.

    However, I can confirm New Jersey is a wonderful state. There are some area's that need Goverment aid, but many places I visited were stunning. Best wishes Donavon.

    p.s. Only just discovered your story.
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  • From ANON - a_reader on June 30, 2006
    I can't imagine why you don't have more reviews. This is a very well-nuanced story and a captivating read. I am enjoying the characterizatoins you've sketched and the mystery. Good work.
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  • From ANON - sbrande on December 18, 2005
    Ch 11 - What a delightful and well thought out story. I can't wait for more. I especially like the way that you have portrayed Luicus as so many of these stories have him as evil, full stop. I can't wait for an update and would appreciate an email as soon as you do.
    Cheers, Sonia (kabrax@dodo.com.au)
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  • From ANON - Aldara on December 12, 2005
    Wow, this story has really earned the rec at WIKTT. ^_^ Great storyline.
    How was your vacation in Greece? I've been there a couple of times, and it was great every time.
    I'd love to see an update (or two) soon!

    Lilywen
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  • From tiddlywinks on December 12, 2005
    This story was recommended on WIKTT, and not having much else to do I thought I'd pop over. I have to say the greek mythology twist was unexpected, but I'm very much enjoying the character interactions. I hope you do update soon.
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  • From Snapegirl51606 on December 12, 2005
    Great fic, I do hope you will update this soon. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Jonathan on November 14, 2005
    What a brilliant idea, to blend the world of Harry Potter with that of Greek mythology. You have left the story in a serious cliff-hanging situation; Hopefully an update is not too far off?
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