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By : AndreaLorraine
  • From NinjaVampirex3 on August 22, 2010
    Wow, this is one of the best Snamione stories I ever read. And I love the way how you add those mysteries that make whole story more interesting. ^____^
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  • From ariathel on October 30, 2009
    Amazing story, I'm assuming this has been abandoned. Hopefully not!
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  • From ANON - mstngkmmy on August 02, 2009
    To begin, I have to say that this story is amazingly well written... Especially since the company it keeps on this site is usually far from great writing; There are many stories here that are entertaining, but lacking in some aspect. Amphitrite is great writing... professional, even. Every part of this story seems so well planned that it's hard to believe that you've written this on the fly...? So, I check back here all the time, to see if you've updated again. Even after all this time without any further chapters, I haven't given up hope that you will finish this story. It is a joy for me to find fanfic that actually has a plot and is so compelling. Please don't abandon this.
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  • From ANON - illnevertell on April 16, 2009
    I had read part of this story ages ago and was so dissapointed to not see any updates for so long and then yesterday something reminded me of it and I thought I would check to see if by some miracle there had been anything added and when I saw that there was I yelled and clapped so loud my kids thought I had lost my mind. I was so thrilled that I had 5 new chapters to read that I cleared my schedule, got through chores and errands and locked myself away from the world with a cup of tea, some cookies, and a threat to kill anyone who dared disturb me. It was so worth it too!! Thanks so much for not abandoning this story. It has been one of my very favorites and is so great that I can't belive its a fanfic. Please, please don't abondon this fic. I want so much to be able to read it through to the end. It has taken years but it is very much worth the waiting and hoping. Thanks again for updating it. Jaimie
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  • From ANON - Sandlewood on October 15, 2008
    Loving it! I can actually like Lucius the way you've portrayed him. Am waiting with bated breath for the next chapter(s)!
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  • From PaganIanthe on September 28, 2008
    I found this through a link on someone else's page and remembered the first few chapters from somewhere else, though I know that I hadn't read as far as 17, so I started again from the beginning, and now, at the end of chapter 17, I find myself hoping that this story gets picked up again at some point, and finished at another.

    I love the OCs you have created, they aren't Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu-esque and I love that Lucius isn't totally reformed - I think that the way you have depicted him makes him seem even more 'human'.

    Good luck in your grad-studies (I have just started my fourth year of part-time study for a degree in English literature while working full-time), and I hope that Amphitrite sees your attention again...
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  • From ANON - ChaosProphet on May 22, 2008
    OH!!!!! PROMETHEUS?!?!?! Prometheus L Bound is our ultimate evil villain??? i guess, mythologically speaking, that makes sense, but this role seems a tad destructive for him. im quibbling (a myspace profile quiz, greek mythology personality quiz, says im alot like him); just conveying my scandalized, hungry-for-more reaction. WOW!!!! i love this!!!! i was reading a review of HTC where the reviewer said they went and read your other stories and loved every one, and since im less than two weeks out of my first year of grad school, im a lazy kat reading all the yummy fanfic i find. i found this one several months before, but had trouble with snape's characterization - he seemed a bit masochistic. i dont know what it was (lucius and the american after reading several new chapters of HTC and SBF, mayhap?), but i got past the sticking point and i fell ass over tits down a freakin amazing rabbit hole!!!! the direction you took the romantic premise was perfect, from an action, romance, and intellectual, so-thats-where-wizards-came-from perspective. i havent looked at your remaining fics, eyes starting to blur together, but ill be keeping an eye on on updates for ALL of them. i know grad school is rough - my own fanfic has been on academic hold - but your writing is amazing and you've got a lot of readers salivating for a word, a syllable! the moment you're ready to post it. cant wait to read a drop in the ocean and strange allies.
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  • From ANON - ChaosProphet on May 21, 2008
    i literally stopped reading IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHAPTER to write this (i couldnt even wait to get down to the bottom of the page!):

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  • From bluezauza on April 30, 2008
    chapter 15
    Dos Santos Escola para Bruxas, Lisbon???
    I wish i new about that school when i was 11 years old!! LOL
    Poor ,poor Lucius, he is in trouble..again! I believe you have some kind of Love/Hate relationship with my poor wizard!I'm reading this story and "Some Blonde Fool" and one of my favorites so far " Hungry Thirsty Crazy", and why, oh why do you have to make him hurt so much when you write him so beautifully??
    Anyway I love your Severus and the plot is great!The God's in Olympus are wizards? Great! just great!
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  • From ANON - jeannie deskins on April 08, 2008
    I love this story. Please don't abandon it. Its well crafted and original.

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  • From bean1498 on April 07, 2008
    This is so good! I love your stories! I love your style and the plots are amazing. God I wish I had your talent. :) I hope you plan to keep going with this one. I love the characters and the the way you've redeemed the 'bad guys'. It's creative and fun and sexy. Yeah you. :)
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  • From ANON - hkapple on February 29, 2008
    that is a really really interesting story!!! i'm so glad i came over it. with all the greek gods and the potion.......

    do please update it soon... i just cant wait to see if severus can brew tat potion and whether Lucius manage to wriggle his way out of this joint... ^^
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  • From ANON - maud on February 29, 2008
    hello, I've only read to the chapter four but I quite like the story, your french is good and do not worry about grammar i'm french myself and don't remember all the rules!!!!!, just to say its spell treize and not trieze, i'm looking forward reading this story in its all, you're a good writer.

    ps: please do not mind the spelling or grammar mistakes!!!!!
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  • From ANON - browneyes2yu on February 27, 2008
    Awesome story. I really like your Snape and Hermione, your Lucius is...quite interesting, I've never read him in such a characterization. I am not sure that he's very believable though, but then again I am Lucius/Hermione and Snape/Hermione shipper (but not menage-a-trois (sp?), so if I am reading Snape/Hermione I don't like to see Lucius with anyone else and vice versa. Anyway, I still like the story...oh, the Russian guy, Joeri you said...did you mean Yuri? (I am Russian, native speaker, and never heard of a Russian name like that) Anyway, while I am reviewing...just wanted to let you know I love your stories and really cant wait to read more of Some Blond Fool(s) and Thirsty,Hngry, Crazy (especially, love it!)...
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  • From ahhsgirl07 on January 30, 2008
    this is an intriguing story, I like it very much and will be checking for updates. It would actually be a good story on it's own. you should consider the prospect of adapting it into a story without the HP characters. But until then keep up the good work. I look forward to reading the rest.
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