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Reviews for Forbidden

By : rubycrush
  • From ANON - mysticneko on November 11, 2005
    It sucks the didn't do anything to each other. It was still hot none the less.
    Hope the next chapter is good as well!
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  • From ANON - Aki-chan on November 10, 2005
    Thank you so much! It's such a relief to find an author on this site that can write with proper grammer and punctuation, get a good plot going, AND have great sex scenes. I absolutely love Forbidden. You didn't stray far from Draco's personality as many of the HP/DM fanfics do, nor did you butcher Harry at all. I was sucked in from the first chapter and you didn't dissappoint in any that followed. I especially liked how you brought up Draco loving Harry from the first time they met, because when I read that, it was like "*click* Ah-ha! That fits PERFECTLY to explain why Draco would have such an attatchment to Harry." After all, Draco is used to getting what he wants and Harry from the start shunned him, provoking Draco's obsession with The Boy Who Lived ^_^ And as the saying goes, "you hurt the ones you love" and Draco has certainly done that repeatedly in the books! So, anyways...please add me to your notification list so I know when the next chapter is up? *kitty eyes* Pwease?

    ...oh and don't abandon this fic until it's concluded or I'll set my internet bloodhounds on you! I will! *holds up button that will release the internet bloodhounds threateningly*
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 10, 2005
    I love your story!! The resistance and tension are great!!
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  • From Gabriella on November 10, 2005
    I try... I really do... *smile* WAY TO GO MINERVA!!! Down pat she has at that!!

    LOVE how Snape observes their interaction!! *snicker* Can you IMMAGINE that in the movies?? (Droooooling... Shakes head..) TYPICAL male response to a crisis such as this! Hand them the task of checking and quantifying the aphrodisiac section of the storage room!! *derisive snort* Dear me, dear me...

    (Raunchy moan....) Oooooooohhhhhhh my dear god in this our own sweet heaven!!! Harry getting unwittingly affected by all those.... different.... potions!!! (Pulls shirt off roughly and runs hand through mussed hair, catching a random drop of sweat trailing off stray damp lock.) That scene was restrained, sexy as HELL, tangible, boiling with musky tension and dear GOD that was soooo good!!! *groan* Soooo good..... soooo good....

    *cough* It was a very good move that they didn't have sex but instead wanked off. It gives more credence to their restraint while still tingling along its edges. Very nicely done. Sadly that's one thing that so bloody few writers do!! Restraint is SEXY!!! It is in fact SEXIER than full out raunch!!!! It's all in the T.E.A.S.E!!! Rather like your Draco in the skirt... (Raised brow)

    Also, still remaining in character!! (Bows in reverance...) Doing bloody good!! Keep it up!!!
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  • From OldLoves on November 10, 2005
    Wow... that was... so hot! Ha, ha, ha. I was expecting something a little different as an outcome of the detention, but if you had to make it that way, I guess I can't force you otherwise. LOL! Great chap. They need to hurry up and just let themselves go soon. That means you need to hurry up and post soon.

    Old loves, they die hard... Old lies, they die harder...

    Morgane
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  • From ANON - rachael leigh on November 10, 2005
    i love this story....is it possible for you to email me when you update?
    i hope so....
    i really cant wait for them to get back together...its killing me...
    keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - fyrefawkes on November 10, 2005
    HOT, as always,lol
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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 10, 2005
    ACK their denial is killing me!!! isn't it time to make with the confessions of love and make-up sex? And Snape shouldn't hide stuff from Draco! bad, sneaky snape needs a spanking.
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  • From ANON - Xtreme17nc13 on November 10, 2005
    Yay! An update! ::kisses feet:: Glad you liked the cookies, I baked them myself. :) Lol, please update again SOON! I want them to have sexy boy-sex again ::rawr:: Toodlez! --Ashlee
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  • From ANON - taisha_aviel on November 09, 2005
    *grins in a most evil manner.

    ok, no pins...but I expect an update soon...our boys are depressed. and you're making my pet boa, draconis cry! (she sits urled around my neck as i read fanfic.)

    *snake begins to cry

    See??? Update soooon. *grabs hankey

    don't cry, drac....
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  • From ANON - Kai on November 09, 2005
    Oh dear, that is so hot!
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  • From ANON - DarkerImage on November 09, 2005
    least there was a litl action
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  • From ANON - blu sanada on November 09, 2005
    Sounds like Draco is starting to fall and Harry is just in denial.
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on November 09, 2005
    That was just to scrumptious. I almost died. I can't wait for Harry and Draco to get back togethr! I beg of you! I will get my dust bunnies after you if you don't!
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  • From ANON - aloveablegimp on November 09, 2005
    Yay! Another awesome chapter ^_^ get the boys back together!!! *presents brownies* pleassseeee
    Cheers!
    Kates
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