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By : rubycrush
  • From ANON - Chiaki Dark on November 18, 2005
    YAY!

    All is explained. I'm soo deleriously happy.

    Thank you for the update!
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  • From ANON - blindedbytheblood on November 18, 2005
    i love u for up dating!
    kick ass story
    aww its cute they're in love
    cant wait to c if they r public with it
    humm..
    wonder how ppl will react
    anyway
    +++++
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  • From ANON - Lady Gray on November 18, 2005
    Awwww. So cute!! great fluffiness. and I want to say i think you did a great job with the recap, you gave us the info we didn't have without repeating yourself. so great.

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  • From ANON - DarkerImage on November 18, 2005
    OMG U BASTARD MOTHERFUCKING...*explicit content* BITCH! HOW CULD U LEAVE OUT SMUT! IT BETR BE RLY RLY GOOD NEXT CHAPTER OR ILL BLOW UR BRAINS OUT! *gets shotgun ready*
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  • From ANON - tratt on November 18, 2005
    ohh, so sweet, I love the interation between Draco and Harry, I can feel the love..
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  • From cruttan on November 18, 2005
    I just found this story (I've been very behind on my reading) and I have to tell you that it is absolutely adorable! Draco is very endearing. A perfect blend of snark, wit, elegance, and the heart of gold that lies buried somewhere beneath all of it. Sigh...

    Your plotline is cute too, and very effective. Have you ever read Jennavere's "The Veela Enigma?" It's on Skyhawke. Anyhow, it is one of my favorites, and this story reminds me of it in a lot of wonderful ways, although your plot devices are entirely unique. You should read it if you haven't- it's wonderful, and as a fellow Draco afficionado, I'm sure you'd enjoy it.

    Anyhow, back to YOUR story.

    I giggled when Hermione recounted Draco and Ron's battle to donate their energy. It's just SO on for the two of them. I really liked the way that you handled Ron and Hermione's discovery of the relationship. Yes, there was tension and an adjustment period, but they dealt with it in the manner I would expect from Harry's two closest friends, and went on to get over their own issues and focus on what was important- being there for Harry. Or, in Hermione's case, helping Draco with what they THOUGHT would keep Harry safe. Well done. I thought it was spot on.

    I do have a soft spot for Lucius, so I very much enjoyed his appearance. Though I doubt JKR's Lucius would be so helpful and accepting, I very much enjoy the way you wrote him, and for the purposes of your fic, I thought it was perfect. It never works as well when writers work in too many obstacles- curses, Pansy, evil Lucius, Voldemort, Death Eaters, etc. It just winds up detracting from the main tension of the piece, and I thought that your story arch worked quite well the way you handled it. Plus I just like the idea of a Lucius that I can get on board with :) *insert suggestive eyebrow waggling*

    I'll definitely be watching this story from now on, though I don't know how much farther you're planning on taking it. Consider me won over! Nice writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2005
    =) YAY! They're together again!
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  • From ANON - watermage on November 18, 2005
    Hehe, well now that my week from hell is over and school blessed us with a full week off for thanksgiving, I've got a few artses that need to get done *grins* I'm trying to decide which scene I want to illustrate...
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  • From ANON - Amessis on November 18, 2005
    Yeah, they made up! Well done.
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  • From ANON - Dezra on November 18, 2005
    This was/is a great story so far.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on November 18, 2005
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 21! They are back together! Yippie! And Hermione and Draco seem to be getting along great.
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  • From ANON - roxierose13 on November 18, 2005
    yay! it's not the end! Makes me happy! They're together!! Finally! I can't wait for the next chapter. *claps hands excitedly* If you update soon, I will give you this rather large cake I baked specially for you. It has cherries and whipped cream, and frosting, and chocolate...oh, now i'm hungry. Darn.
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on November 18, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWW that was so sappy ass sweet! Yeah for them getting their act together!! woot! do a little dance get dowm tonight! Who knew draco was such a romantic...;)
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  • From ANON - Amanda on November 18, 2005
    OMG! This story is awesome!! Pleeeease email me when you post another chapter! I'm really glad I'm joining late in the game. Waiting for updates would have killed me! lol. My email is alg138@yahoo.com and my aim is magicchic82. Thanks! Amanda
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  • From ANON - Mystique on November 18, 2005
    You know, you're a good writer, the way you flow the story make me addicted. I'm a silence reader but it was so good so I need to praise you. This chapter as example, was so entertaining and sweet. The way Draco interacted with his father as same as I imagine it would be for their interaction in father and son semi-formal relationship. The last conversations between them are so pleasing, that is my favorite.
    Keep up the good work, you should write more.

    Regards
    Mystique
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