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Reviews for Broken Dreams

By : moreyel
  • From ANON - dracoismysexgod on January 23, 2006
    this is so sad! great job...i love how you describe draco's feelings
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  • From ANON - Becca on December 20, 2005
    This was fantastic.
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  • From ANON - moonjameskitten on November 29, 2005
    Oh ! one-shot fiction ?...wow ! that is powerful ! simple. Clear. I love Draco 's determination and courage. He's beautiful.
    Absolutly sad but beautiful.
    You did a great work !
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  • From ANON - Di on November 20, 2005
    yeah .. pretty cool, not as angsty as I had imagined it but that was what made it better to me :) .. and the smirk at the end .. great job ;)

    Di
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  • From ANON - Bek Allen on October 30, 2005
    *cries*...

    Take it back! Please just take it all back!...

    This was a wonderful story, you had me on the edge of my seat, thinking Draco and 'Mione were going to have a happy ending that resulted in little bouncing baby Draco's and 'Mione's... But to... gosh damn my heart all but stopped.

    A brilliant piece of work. Keep writing no matter what.

    Bek
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  • From ANON - julie on October 28, 2005
    i think your story was great. the ending was done wonderfully. i really like the idea of draco doing something so caring even though he was a death eater. its also very nice to think of him and hermione together in an afterlife...aw. nice job. keep it up.
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  • From ANON - sassyspicegurrl on October 27, 2005
    i don't want to flame, but that was soooo sad! i hated it! nothing personal, liked the writing, but i didn't like the storyline. way to sad. no smut. ;D keep writing, though.
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  • From ANON - Marigold (NOT LOGGED IN AND TOO LAZY, SORRY) on October 08, 2005
    My, my, you make it very belivable, LOVE IT. And your favorite list has some of the stories I've been looking for quite a while. Ah, I'm listening to a very sad piano version of a song. Very sad, and best part is, since it's on the web and looped, there are no visable stops because the whole song as the same theme, perfect.

    Very, both this story and the song, and together, they were made to be.
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  • From ANON - rickety on October 07, 2005
    nice.
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  • From ANON - rin on October 07, 2005
    I liked it. The things that I liked were the unexpected events. The touching, loving act that Draco did was so right and totally unexpected. This one shot story was very good. You should write more one shots, or maybe write a series, b/c I am sure that I will read it and enjoy(if I don't I will write and say so, but I am sure that I will like it).
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  • From ANON - kate on October 07, 2005
    wow.
    shivers and tears, baby.
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