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Reviews for Into the Closet

By : roxierose13
  • From ANON - Alison on January 13, 2006
    Gosh this is such a great story! =o)
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  • From ANON - niamh!yay on January 13, 2006
    YAY [but omg doesnt pansy know that she wouldnt know at all if harry hadnt wanted her to find out??]

    NOW draco needs to stop being a prat. this story is great, but it seems to be going aroudnd in circles
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  • From ANON - Darrin on January 11, 2006
    It was ok. I think I had a problem with not enough description. Yes. I also had a problem with how you made them speak, I just can't see them fitting their characters. I hope this somehow helps you. It's just one moment Harry was back against the wall, then suddenly Draco was pushing himself into him. I am a gay male myself, and I think you're a female, unsure, but your username "roxierose" kinda makes me think girl. I know this sounds bad, but I have a problem with females writing gay slash/fanfiction between males. Because usually the girls write or draw each character as if they are taking estrogen, or in fact girls in boys' bodies. I have nothing against you of course, I'm trying to help... also when they came. I noticed Harry and "Draco was not too far behind" but... you should have went on to explain when he did, not just left it at that. Climaxing is a very nice feeling and it should all honestly get a paragraph on it's own for both members, if not each getting their own paragraph for their climax's.

    I hope this critisizm can help you to get better. ^_^
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  • From Narius on January 11, 2006
    You know this is brilliant, right? Harry's on the verge of being in Slytherin for this. Ron, of course, has to be the ultimate lummox. Hermione isn't as overbearingly annoying as she is in other fics. This is great. And lemon!!!! All stories should have a twist of lemon. Thank you for writing this....now hurry up and post the next chapter!!!!!!!
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  • From MimiMoonstone on January 10, 2006
    OMG!!! I heart this storry so much! Can't wait till next review. You write so well! I want to find out so bad What'll happen to Harry cause of the "dream" Can't wait till Friday the 13th!
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  • From GML on January 09, 2006
    lol! Harry! Shame! *snicker* I can't wait to see what Draco's reaction is to last night my self! *evil grin* I can just imagine the look on his face when he falls back asleep only to wake up in the morning and realise his shirt and things are Exactly where they were tossed. And Ron FINALLY appologised! Took his dumb arse long enough! Humph! More Please!! ASAP!
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  • From JamesRipLily on January 08, 2006
    niiice stuff. get sbetter every weeks although i cant wait 2 find out what happens.
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  • From ANON - V-magnet on January 08, 2006
    that actually a cliffie! WANT MORE (youre so good ^^)
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  • From ANON - Kari on January 08, 2006
    GAH! -cccrrrriiiieeesss- there are reason i never start reading stories that are not finished... its a simple thing calld... I HAVE NO PATIENCE! -beet the mimi- she just HHHAAAADDDD to send it to me -sigh- alas... i must wait until next friday...

    until then

    MUCH love!

    xx-Kari-xx
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  • From ANON - natasha on January 08, 2006
    hey loving your story try to update soon i want to find out whats going to happen
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  • From ANON - penny on January 08, 2006
    I have read through this twice so far, enjpying it immensely. I 'm glad you let Harry top once in a while, jeez! It hasnt been fair, has it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2006
    another g8 chapter! hope u add more soon!!! i cant wait till fridaaaayyyyy.... :(
    loving the seamus nd blaise zabini too!
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  • From ANON - *Moony* on January 07, 2006
    next friday cant come soon enough, i need more.
    i need to know what happens...what is dracos reaction...what is going on with blaze and semus more more more
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  • From ANON - Chi on January 07, 2006
    Already waiting. T_T
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  • From ANON - Berg on January 07, 2006
    lol "it wasn't a dream". good chapter! wonder what will happen next??
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