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Reviews for Magickal Mutants

By : Alquavani
  • From ANON - PotterLuver on October 09, 2005
    This is ok, so far. It's kind of weird that you mixed X-men and HP, but it seems interesting so far.
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  • From ANON - Paula on October 09, 2005
    Hi!
    It looks great. I can't wait to read more of this.
    I love X-Men, and usually, I love crossovers, so I'm really looking forward to this story.
    Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Silver1 on October 09, 2005
    This is an interesting crossover. I trust there will be some explaination later as to how albus and xavier know each other? Overall, a good story, especially the characterization of logan. But, please, pay more attention to spelling and grammer, as they can take away from a good story. For example, the names. the correct names of some of the characters are Ororo and Lucius, not aurora and lucious (which means yummy - not something I personally would associate with the elder malfoy). Also, some words are left out of the sentence - such as "head" instead of "he had". Any easy thing to have happen, I do it all the time. I am really not trying to be an anal retentive nit-picker, and this is NOT a flame. I just love the concept and the story is very good so far. Just thought it would help. Anyway, picking nits aside, I really have enjoyed this story so far, and hope you keep up the good work and update soon!
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