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Reviews for Funerals and Weddings

By : iamscullysmile
  • From ANON - Hazel on November 09, 2005
    P.S. I was reading through some of the other reviews that the other reader had posted, and I came across this really smart reader (this is going to bug me I cant remember who she is!) this reader made the comment about how there were a bunch of reader who thought that our lovely writer, had messed up and posted a copy of a previous posting. I wanted to make a comment a say that I new that it wasn
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  • From ANON - Hazel on November 09, 2005
    OMG!!!!! You can't leave it there!!!! Your so EVIL!!! You finally get to a Draco Harry moment then
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  • From ANON - Tatemshope on November 09, 2005
    Awesome! Brilliant! Amazing! Fantastic! Orgasmic! OMFGosh! This is so wonderful. I seriously almost cried from relief at the end. I am so totally emotionally invested in your story and this chapter was amazing! It was exactly what I had hoped for! Thanks so much! Update soon!
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  • From Diabolus on November 09, 2005
    I can't believe you left it at such a cliff hanger!!! OMG! I've been waiting for that to happen through the entire story, and you go and stop just as they do! You're so evil, yet so good as well!

    Great chapter as always. I was a slight bit confused to begin with, but it made sense as soon as they got back to Hogwarts. I'm really glad they sorted everything out - you did the scene brilliantly. How many people thought chapter 34 was a repeat then? I knew it wasn't! I could tell every modification in it, and how the little change really made all the difference between understanding it in the first place, and then understanding it after you've read up to that point.

    Brilliant! Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on November 09, 2005
    Chapter 36 please! They kiss! What happens next?
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  • From ANON - cinque on November 09, 2005
    i know i repeat myself but i loooooooooooove vou and your story. The only reason i go to school eath day is because i can use the internet and can read. Thank you soo much for this story.
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  • From ANON - bem on November 09, 2005
    argh!!!! this is so frustrating!!!! how, how, how COULD you end that chapter with that cliffhanger?!??!??! INJUSTICE!!!! but other than that, this is just wonderful.
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  • From ANON - LongBlackSatinLace on November 06, 2005
    Wow. This story is truly amazing. I've been reading it all week, but didn't want to review till I had caught up. I am totally in LOVE with the story. You have a great plot, plus delicious bits of smuttyness thrown in there to keep us wanting more. I can't wait to see what happens when they get back to Hogwarts. And especially when Harry finds out Draco sent the pnedent and note. Mrow. Good times. Keep writing, I can't wait to see more!!
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  • From ANON - sundance_gurl on November 06, 2005
    Heya, I love the story. Just have one comment on ur overall writing. ur idea is great but i found that ur first few chaps were confusing in that it's hard to keep track of the time jumping. another thing, in this last chap, obviously, it is going over events that u already described in an earlier chap. it's kinda repetitive. i can't really remember exactly when harry started to flashback to the events of the summer and fall term but maybe where ur now going over the same events in this chap u should have him come back to himself (I mean the harry who's looking back on this part of the story). i don't know if this make any sense or not but it's what i found to be the only thing u need to work on to improve the story, constructive criticism. Besides that though the story's great and i love it. keep it up.

    CHEERS!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on November 06, 2005
    Chapter 35 please!
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  • From ANON - DarkerImage on November 05, 2005
    (this review is after the one for the next chapter) oh...whoops. didnt know this scene was in the beginning...now it makes sense. lol. stupid me
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  • From ANON - DarkerImage on November 05, 2005
    hey, i dont usually review but this chap wuz rly familiar...i culd swear ive read it sumwhere else. this chapter happened, and in the next he goes in and they all bug him about what took him so long...
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  • From ANON - Hazel on November 05, 2005
    You just took the peace that you wrote at the beganing and stuck it in there; though I understand why you did it that way, but then you just left it at that!! NEED MORE DRACO & HARRY INTERACTION!!!! other wise good work and I like it.
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  • From ANON - Cara on November 05, 2005
    This chapter was so clever!! I loved how you added in their thoughts....

    Get on with the smut!!! lol jk.....=D

    no but seriously you torturing me......They need each other!! -_~

    Good luck on the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - Bayb43 on November 05, 2005
    I absolutely love your story...check it every day for updates, hoping you'll do more than one:) Great job with that, by the way, you always have new stuff up and it's always just as good. I can't wait for the next part, now that we've gone full circle!
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