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By : foxygirl
  • From ANON - The Dark Child [Am a girl on October 19, 2005
    Hay love it please please update asp oh it's Snape isn't or Darco Oh i don't known
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  • From ANON - Osaki on October 18, 2005
    AHHH!!! OMG! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!! *cuddles Harry* Poor thing. Hes all sad and crying and I JUST WANNA GIVE HIM TEA!!! *sniffles* Update soon, please, please, please *puppy dog eyes*

    Osaki
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on October 17, 2005
    oh boy! here we go did harry change any, ge any magic powers, was lucius full succbi so as harry is his soul mate he became half of lucius whole maybe, or oh the possibilities who's kid is he if not the potters. looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - sbkar on October 17, 2005
    To increase the readability of your story, space after each paragraph. Do you have a beta, to help catch grammar, misspelling, and punctuation problems? If you don't, try the Yahoo Group.
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on October 17, 2005
    i understand your issue... as a writer you know where your story is going and the readers don't... the story is great so far... update soon
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  • From ANON - acr on October 16, 2005
    THis is interesting. did he get the creature inheritance from Voldy? BTW, female-Succubus (plural-Succubi) and male-Incubus (Incubi)
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  • From ANON - Xenia Marvolo on October 16, 2005
    Great story! I really adore it! :)
    Yours Lucius is written just as I like him to be... *licks lips* I want more...
    *looks innocently with puppy eyes* how soon will you update? I'd really like to read more and as soon as possible *grins* :D

    Love Xenia Marvolo

    P.S. I saved this story on my computer in my private documents:)
    P.P.S. Please update soon - I like this story so very very very much!
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  • From ANON - anjela wolfe on October 16, 2005
    Just one tiny thing. Succubi are female. Incubi are male. and of course those two forms are the plural.
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on October 16, 2005
    Yes its a good beginning, however, from a readers point of view the chapters are very short.

    Try to increase the lengh you don't have to end on a cliffie everytime.

    However I will be looking forward to the next chapter be it small or long.
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  • From ANON - Missi on October 15, 2005
    OH...MY...GOD....ok, so you need to continue this. pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease?!?!?! Cause I need to know where Harry got sex-demon blood from!!
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  • From ANON - The Dark Child [Am a girl on October 15, 2005
    WOW I READLLY LIKE THIS FIC PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASP


    THANKS
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  • From ANON - Storm on October 15, 2005
    Very interesting beginning. I can't wait to read what happens next. Is it going to be Dom!Lucius?
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on October 15, 2005
    ooooh... update soon.... i can't wait to read how this develops...
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  • From ANON - Aisling on October 15, 2005
    oooh i like... more soon... i wanna know who Hary's real parent(s) are/were now.. please update soon cya later xxx
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  • From ANON - TyRisha on October 15, 2005
    interesting. so his parents aren't who he thinks they are. my only question then is who his real parents are. also, seeing as succubi are actually female, doens't that make harry an incubus, not a succubus? anyways, please conitnue
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