Reviews for The MarriageBy : snapeygirl |
OOC I don't think you read the characters as intelligent as they are you seem kind of dumb down slightly but being that you are not a professional writer probably it's actually pretty good Just like problems with here and there but if you kept writing after this I haven't looked to see if you have other work but maybe you haven't concern you stopped or that maybe you got better and you didn't like this but it's pretty good so you should finished it but May have been left because there are some slightly less but really good for Fan Fic at least you didn't go overboard with the Yuma mother instead of your mother stuff there was a few but it was good
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