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Reviews for The Marriage

By : snapeygirl
  • From Shellnet on October 01, 2019

    OOC  I don't think you read the characters as intelligent as they are you seem kind of dumb down slightly but being that you are not a professional writer probably it's actually pretty good Just like problems with here and there but if you kept writing after this I haven't looked to see if you have other work but maybe you haven't concern you stopped or that maybe you got better and you didn't like this but it's pretty good so you should finished it but May have been left because there are some slightly less but really good for Fan Fic at least you didn't go overboard with the Yuma mother instead of your mother stuff there was a few but it was good


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  • From mamabear52 on October 01, 2007
    Your last update was on November 13th 2006. I DO hope that you will be updating very soon. Your readers are looking forward to the rest of it. Please try and post the whole thing if possible. Can't wait to see the rest. Please get to that keyboard and get it burning up with your story.


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  • From mamabear52 on September 30, 2007
    I do hope that you will be updating very soon, it would be a shame to let it go. Please do an update soon, many of your readers will be very happy. Don't let the last few books influence your writing. Make it AU now but PLEASE finish the story !!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 16, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Amethystique on November 28, 2006
    Great story so far. I need MORE!!!!
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  • From LoverofDarkness on November 18, 2006
    Please update!
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 14, 2006
    WOW. it has been a long time sense you updated this story. i am glad you have not abonded it! :) i am looking froward to reading it, please don't take so long in updates! (or i might be dead before you finish it ;))
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  • From megf212 on November 14, 2006
    I like the concept...but, i think that Severus is a little out of character. Not that I don't like it, but, I think he needs a little more of his wonderful wicked streak.
    Keep writing
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  • From ANON - angel on November 14, 2006
    wow i love it .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Annie on November 14, 2006
    A bit rough but other then that i like it.
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  • From ANON - Nightwitch on November 13, 2006
    Please add more to this story,I love the way you wrote the storyline:P
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 11, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - me on November 25, 2005
    please please please update i absolutley love this
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  • From ANON - Terri on November 08, 2005
    wow, love it, doesn't seem to be the nasty potions master, hope to be reading more very soon. if you have an e-mail list please add me
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  • From ANON - brittany on November 05, 2005
    I love this. Its so sweet/ cute. Please update soon or I'll kill you.
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