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Reviews for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Marc S. on October 25, 2005
    I've been following your stories now for quite awhile and as an author myself I have to say you're an incredible writer. Your plotlines are mindblowing. Severus and Hermione make a great married couple, using their love as a shield was smart.
    I haven't said anything up until now. But Marcus and Cassandra has grown on me since you introduced them, and I'm really excited to see what you'll do with them. I think we already have our virginal, bookworm and dark hero in Severus and Hermione. Personally, I think Endora has served her purposes as Cassandra's friend. And as a character she was the device in which Marcus can get closer to Cassandra. Endora's been made a "woman" and that's great but I think as far as couple's go, Cassandra would be an awesome woman for Marcus.
    I think if you were to put Endora with Marcus we would be seeing another Severus and Hermione love story all over again. And that can become a bit redundant. Adding Cassandra as Marcus's lover might be the best way to go, it adds spice to the story.
    Keep 'em coming Ms_Figg.
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on October 25, 2005
    "Ohh..I see your goodies!" *ROTFL* That was the best line ever! Oh my...that was priceless.... What a great job with the details you gae us. I was right there with them. And, clever little trick of Peeves...not telling them that they'd be naked! Agian...classic. I love what you have done creating the alternate plane here. So...they preyed on Hermione's feelings first. Her grandfather...that was wicked man! Oh,...yeah for Marcus for pointing it out. I'm glad Severus trusts him a little. I certianly hope you have a fast update after this. I am so anxious! Ever your devoted fan.....
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  • From ANON - angel on October 25, 2005
    wow im glad cassandre and endora are there to help marcus out ... i cant wait... keep up the awesome job and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on October 25, 2005
    Wow Ms_Figg, this is some tale ou have woven my friend! Who, but you, could create this fantasy? The details you have brought in, Endora, Cassandra, Peeves, the Astral Plane, pure perfection! The details and the bacl stories or sub plots really just show what you are made of. Not just a silly story but it even has a moral. I can not tell you how wonderful you are, but can only say that I am waiting with baited breath for the actual projection to the astral plane. I am sure, as everything else, that t will be perfect. I look forward most, to seeing Cassandra help them out and hear his explainations for it to Severus and Hermione. But, I can not help but wonder, I found myself wanting Marcus to love Endora (not sure of the spelling, sorry). I think the act of kindness he showed to her will awaken a "new" marcus. But....I could be wrong. Buut it helped Severus, did it not? The smart, bookish, girl won over the almost comsumed wizard and brought him a ray of sun light. Ah well...I will wait to see it for myself. But I am now a solid shipper for these two!
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  • From ANON - beelzebub on October 25, 2005
    it's great to have a chapter like this one in your story. it really contrasts with the lemons -making them all the more fun.
    you write suspense well. almost TOO well... (remarkably jealous)
    it would be great to read an original fic if you have one. your character work is great. -even if you take away the magic, you still have interesting people.


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  • From ANON - tak on October 25, 2005
    another stellar chapter.

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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on October 25, 2005
    SNAPELOVER: I'll take that single little star, thank you. I'm not greedy. ;)
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  • From ANON - snapelover on October 25, 2005
    BORING!! and I thought you were supposed to be a GOOD writer. I give this ONE star.
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  • From ANON - droxy on October 25, 2005
    the suspense is killing me. Thank you for teh frequent updates!
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  • From ANON - tak on October 25, 2005
    back in form again i see. great to see another chapter so soon. very nicely written, -it's all getting quite complex yet you make it look effortless.
    it seems marcus has another, nicer, side. interesting. i hope that Endora makes an appearance in future stories.

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  • From ANON - Megan on October 25, 2005
    Loving this one as well. You're the only Hermione / Snape author I've read since you started the first one of this series. One thing: please please please continue with the Marcus / Endora thing. It doesn't have to be sweet, I just really liked the dynamic between them and the way she blossomed when noticed. I mean, he remade her house, for god's sake.
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  • From ANON - angel on October 25, 2005
    wow ... i like the good thing that matcus did fo endora... i cant wait to see that will happen next and in till then keep up the awesome awesome job ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anguloce on October 25, 2005
    on, is it? fantastic. bring it, my delightful Lady Figg.
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  • From ANON - bronte on October 25, 2005
    I wonder if Marcus might be better suited with Endora...he really was a nice guy in this chapter. It made me hopeful.
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  • From ANON - JW on October 25, 2005
    Ch 21 - omigosh, what a lucky Endora! And I do wonder what Cassandra will do on that battlefield - whether she will survive, and whether Endora will be there with Albus to help pull out Marcus and Cassandra and Peeves. Boy, that Marcus is getting softer all the time - redecorating Endora's house and wardrobe. No wonder Fawkes was singing for Marcus. Okay, I'm ready for the battle!!
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