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Reviews for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Chris on October 24, 2005
    Lemons? I want a whole fruit salad. I'm really enjoying your story. Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - Adena on October 24, 2005
    The story is coming together nicely. But I think it would be nice to hear about Marcus and his night out. ( We already know how Severus and Hermione get down!) But, in my opinion, I think it would be better to leave off Cassandra for maybe Marcus's storyline ( If you do plan to do one, which would be really nice!), and have Marcus just get together with some random chick for this specific story.
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - JW on October 24, 2005
    Ch 18 - personally, I could skip the Severus-Hermione lemons for now, as this talk was really what they needed, after Hermione's poor reaction to Marcus. Severus is absolutely correct in that Marcus NEEDS for S&H to be close together in the battle. I think we need to see what Marcus does tonight, as THAT is important to his emotional state in the upcoming battle. Hmm.... and what is Peeves up to tonight? Sure you can't bring back the Obeah or her friend for Marcus, either for tonight or the battle? Hmm, perhaps Marcus' ancestress Fiona (or dragon?) will help him in the battle - that would be cool, as it has been a LONG time (since he was 9) that he's had someone truly care for him; and he could free her, if she's trapped.
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  • From ANON - lilly on October 24, 2005
    Lemons! Lemons! For Lemonaide! I absolutely love lemons there are very few cases of too many lemons and that is then there is no variety to the lemons. Some should be sweet others sour. A variety of lemons make the best lemonaide. Keep up the great work! Oh and I can not wait to read the next story about the woman obsessed with Severus. Rock on, Girl Friend.
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  • From ANON - Snapesslave on October 24, 2005
    Very, very good so far Ms_Figg. I can't wait for the final battle and to see what becomes of Lord and Lady Snape, not to mention Marcus. Please update soon, the waiting keeps me on pins and needles. Alistar seems to quite the entity to be reckoned with. Keep up the fantastic writing.
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  • From ANON - D on October 24, 2005
    Great story!
    I relally like the Marchus chracter!
    Cant wait to read what is next!
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  • From ANON - JW on October 24, 2005
    Ch 17 - if the nasty critters can change their form to resemble folks familiar to Severus, Hermione, and Marcus, shouldn't our heroes have a password or something, so they can identify the "real" Severus, Hermione, and Marcus? The wizard who got "taken" that Peeves saw - I'm curious if it's a famous wizarding history figure, and whether the truth of his fate is known in history books - or only to Peeves. This battle sounds nasty! Too bad the Obeah woman won't be there to help Albus - or will she.....
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  • From ANON - angel on October 24, 2005
    lol well all is well for now and all the strategies are done now the just thw to put them to work .. please update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - bronte on October 23, 2005
    It would be so neat if Marcus were able to find love. I love your characters!
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  • From ANON - Ms-Figg on October 23, 2005
    Calamity: Hermione seems to eat a lot of salad when she's nervous about something. But she likes Reuben sandwiches and other foods, tomato soup, shrimp and vegetables. Hamburgers and fries. Ham sandwiches with lettuce and tomato. Actually, she seems to like what I like! Imagine that.
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on October 23, 2005
    By now you should knuw just how much I love your work. But I have got 1 question:
    Does Hermione ever eat something other then the chefs salad?

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - Prince Demitri on October 23, 2005
    Not your rusual quality. You have written and done better. This is a somewhat disappointing story. I guess the hermione/snape bus can only be so interesting. Typical, typical
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 23, 2005
    How exciting! I love the repartee between the Snapes and Marcus. It adds so much life to the storyline especially when Marcus goes out of his way to irritate the pair. lol

    I also like knowing the fact that the blood of the dead women are also a hold on Alistar as I couldn't see why it would not be.

    Looking forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - JW on October 23, 2005
    Ch 16 - dare I hope that Hermione, Severus, and Marcus will be - gasp - FRIENDS, by the end of this adventure? Or at least less enemy-like.... Any more attacks on Muggleborns by Alastar? This is wonderful buildup to the battle - thanks for posting!!!
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  • From ANON - beelzebub on October 23, 2005
    aargh...so much tension. -so that explains why dumbledore can't get alistar...makes sense i suppose.
    i find one of the most difficult things about writing/reading hp fanfiction is that there are no real boundaries. (it's also one of the most liberating...) but still, not knowing the exact limits of a wizarding world can be frustrating. you seem to deal with this aspect remarkably well; a few writers bring too much of the real world into their work which tends to (but not always) diminish the 'magic' of hp somewhat.
    thanks for another great chapter.

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