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Reviews for Talk Parseltongue to me!

By : chisox727
  • From ANON - ichie-chan on October 15, 2005
    you should continue this story!! if you are than please update soon!! the title was very tempting, especially to me. i normally don't read PWP but how can anyone resists draco wanking to harry speaking parseltongue!! i know that if i was in his place i would have done the same thing!!
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  • From writeright on October 15, 2005
    Overall, not terrible, but I'm gonna point out a few minor flaws in both your logic and word choice.
    1. Nagini is not the snake Harry freed. The potion bringing Voldemort back to life contained her venom; boa constrictors aren't venomous creatures. They squeeze their prey to death.

    2. Draco is most certainly not on the side of the Order, as much as fangirls would like to think so. He tried to kill Dumbledore, for crying out loud! People will argue that between years 6 and 7, he could very well have a change of heart, but his thoughts about things have never changed in the past. Why would they change now?

    3. When you used the word "syllabic", I think you meant "sibilant". Your word choice means "Pronounced with every syllable distinct" and mine means "producing a hissing sound like that of (s) or (sh)".
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  • From ANON - jobberknoll on October 15, 2005
    So, did Harry bolt out of the room in a panic because one of the snakes told him stalker boy was in the closet?
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  • From ANON - miku on October 15, 2005
    This was realy good! Poor Draco getting left all on his lonesome. xx This is just a sugestion but will there be another chapter or a sequal? It's not necisary but it'd be cool to see one. Well done!
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  • From ANON - scully on October 15, 2005
    oooh! almost sort of a voyeur draco...but not! cool. i think the closet will be draco's new fave place, haha! hope next chap is soon!
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  • From ANON - Demon on October 15, 2005
    This is great is there going to be another chapter or is this a one shot?
    I really do hope there is another chapter
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  • From ANON - Ritinha on October 15, 2005
    Ohhhhh, kinky! It is going to have a second chapter or Draco will stay only with this hot session? ;)
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  • From ANON - WynterRose on October 15, 2005
    oh wow...that was intense. I love it...i want more, but somehow I get the feeling it is a one-shot. That was awesome
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  • From Reyn on October 15, 2005
    okay, there definitely needs to be a part 2 to this.
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  • From ElysianMusic on October 15, 2005
    *eyes widen* well,well,well heh is there gonna be more?! if there is I am BEGGING YOU to update! please? that was very....erm...oh i dunno....as Draco said...or thought "FANFUCKINGTASTIC!" XD haha
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on October 15, 2005
    Why did Harry cry out and then leave? Holy moly! Draco could have been caught? Can't wait for chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - roxierose13 on October 15, 2005
    wow! That was interesting...haha...oh, Draco, i think someone might have heard....but who knows, maybe we will? If you update soon?? Please!
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  • From ANON - Amessis on October 15, 2005
    Well done! Is there more? I feel sorry for Draco.
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