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Reviews for #8 ~ A Rather Catty Situation

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Snapesslave on November 02, 2005
    Ms_Figg .... as usual you are doing a fantastic job on this story. I love that Hermione's not scared anymore, just thoroughly pissed. I think SHE needs some reassurance sex right now. *hint,hint* Lemons.
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  • From ANON - larissa on November 02, 2005
    haha. is it wrong that im glad Marcus finally got what's coming to him?
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  • From ANON - Stormi on November 02, 2005
    Chapter 16 - Marcus is in trouble and Hermione better watch Odessa!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on November 02, 2005
    Yep... he really does need to practise safe sex! Lol! Jeez, and I bet he's not going to report it - I hope he at least tells Hermione or Severus or even Albus!!!! But somebody! I look forward to your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - JW on November 02, 2005
    Ch 17 - I knew she should've told him that "something bad" happens if she climaxes due to her body chemistry or something. Well, I wonder if anyone will come looking for Marcus - I don't think those bottles of potions will be enough, as those injuries sound wicked. And Odessa isn't just a kitty-cat, is she - a panther? Poor house elves.... Too bad Marcus couldn't turn into a dragon, but he's not a registered Animagus either, I bet. Scary! Thanks for posting.
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on November 02, 2005
    Beelzebub: Glad you like the story so far. The term 'several' can be used to describe an unnamed number. Here's the definition I got from answers.com

    sev
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  • From katrinajones on November 02, 2005
    great, very interesting how she can't control her animagus form after the act, -nice twist.

    one beta thingy:

    'Thank the gods he acquired several flasks of it, the rest meant for use in class. He opened the first one and swallowed it down. It brought some relief. He went through all eight flasks. Exhausted and drugged, he passed out.'

    seven or eight?

    love your work.
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  • From ANON - Marsha on November 02, 2005
    OMG. We're on Chapter 16 already!!! You write the best lemony goodness. Thank you again for the quick updates. I adore Marcus and hope that you continue to include him in your stories. He is a great original character.

    It's about time someone wrote a jealous mature Hermione. Most writers who've written jealous Hermione, portray her as being under twenty and jealous for one week, due to her immaturity. It's nice to see Snape desired and pursued and Hermione jealous because she's in love with him and possessive.

    I kinda feel bad for Odessa. You've been dropping bits and pieces of her background, and it sounds miserable. However, at one point, you have leave your past behind and live life to the fullest, without being bug-on crazy. Going after another woman's man is always a dumb idea. Can't wait to see how she deals with the real Severus Snape. Not the one she's fashioned from her delusions. And hey, what was in that bag? LOL.


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  • From ANON - JW on November 01, 2005
    Ch 16 - drat! Where's Eli when you need him! and Leaf Ear! Elves must talk to each other, right? Or to Dumbledore, since the Hogwarts elves work for him? Doesn't Dumbledore know anything that's going on? Eeps! Will anyone find Marcus' body when Odessa gets through with him??
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  • From ANON - Koda on November 01, 2005
    Don't let Marcus die. :o And, great chapter.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 01, 2005
    marcus she is not worth you time you can do alot better then her ..... please more and cant wait to read what till happen next .. in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - droxy on November 01, 2005
    very curious, next chapters should be interesting.

    so glad SS and HG-S had that chat.
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  • From ANON - droxy on November 01, 2005
    poor hermione, and i do hope marcus gets his just desserts....hehe

    i hope hermione tells severus her fears
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  • From ANON - firewall on November 01, 2005
    Oh yes, I think there is a little more behind Odessa's little black cat...another worry. BUT I really don't think Hermione needs to worry about Severus...nope, nope, not at all. He didn't need to face his greatest fear in the last story because he already knew what it was and rather than become overwhelmed by it, reacted proactively by ensuring her protection.
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  • From ANON - firwall on November 01, 2005
    Oh boy, if I have interpreted the clues you've laid down in the story correctly, then Marcus is really taking a big chance and will need the help from his ancestors. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for him. Great chapters as usual.
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