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Reviews for #8 ~ A Rather Catty Situation

By : Ms_Figg

From ANON - Hypatia on November 01, 2005
Please pardon my oversight. I was....you know....engaged in urgent business with Lord Voldemort.

Just wanted to thank you for the wonderful lemons which you manage to cast anew at the feet of your worthless servants, making us feel all ---inadequate.

Great job, once again.
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From ANON - becca on November 01, 2005
i love all of your stories. i also love how frequently you update! marcus is in for it, isn't he? i can't wait for the big cat fight 'tween hermione and odessa, i just hope severus gets some vengence of his own. great job!
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From ANON - glenn on November 01, 2005
i like this chapter, the story in moving, i really hope marcus has something hard ahead, he is a bastard and deserves it, I can wait to see how severus is going to handle this situation... update soon!
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From ANON - Hypatia on November 01, 2005
Hermione is way too insecure at the moment. Perhaps opening a connection detailing Snape's past genital entanglements with Bella and Narcissa might help, but....perhaps she needs a "girls' night" poker game with Ginny and Minerva, Tonks, etc. She's too much of an asset to let this bimbo get to her!!!

Barring that, go Marcus!!!!

(And your excellent obeah woman, Ms. Figg. -- is perhaps the most honorable, worthy and least pathetic of all)
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From ANON - tak on November 01, 2005
*yay* so many great chapters to read. i wonder how severus will react when hermione tells him odessa is after him? can't wait for the next installment.
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From ANON - Stormi on November 01, 2005
Chapter 15 - Oh wow is Marcus ever going to be in trouble. Good thing Cassandra is so patient with him. I hope that Hermione wacks Odessa but good, without the getting fired part.
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From ANON - DawnEB on November 01, 2005
I had a thought as I read this chapter - if she tries to bite it off, can he shrink it to a really small unfidable size, as well as massive? ;D I've been following this series of stories since you began, and your style has really improved in such a short time - yet more reason to keep me coming back for more.
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From ANON - angel on November 01, 2005
man marcus dont do it back out now .... i know yu hate mione and snape but odessa is carzy please dont do it .... well in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
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From ANON - JW on November 01, 2005
Ch 15 - yikes! Cassandra isn't even going to warn Marcus? So what happens to Odessa if she climaxes - she turns into a cannibal-cat or something? And what kind of info will Marcus tell Odessa - will he tell her about the time he saw S&H have sex? Will he offer to duplicate that experience for her? I do hope Hermione tells Severus about Odessa and the plane. Go back to your keyboard and write the next chapter!! Please???
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From ANON - Laura on November 01, 2005
Hmmm, what is Odessa's secret? Sounds like Marcus will get more than he bargained for...
I can't wait to see Hermione's Lioness tear Odessa's black cat to shreds! Crazy beotch.
Is Hermione pale and sick to her stomach simply because of the confrontation? Or is there another reason???
Love this story- superbly written- hope to see more soon, MsFigg. :)
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From ANON - JTBJAB on November 01, 2005
I hope Severus is worried about why Hermione doesn't join him for breakfast! If not he is a bad man! Lol! And as much as I sorta hated Marcus before... I hope he doesn't get hurt... too much!
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From ANON - Citten on November 01, 2005
W.O.W.!!! okay you sure know how to write them! I know it is your story, but could i ask/suggest something? an all out "cat" fight would be fun especally if a certain "snake" has to step in. ;) DON'T FEEL OBLIGATED TO DO SO I JUST THAUGHT THAT IT WOULD BE FUN TO SEE WITH YOUR WRITTING STYLE!
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From ANON - Koda on November 01, 2005
I see a cat fight in the near future.
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From ANON - ChiChi on November 01, 2005
WOW...that about sums your story up...i love every one bit of it...the way you keep Severus in character... and Hermione who's becoming quiet a lioness...and the Odessa woman, i wouldn't want her near my man(",)

Keep up the good work, love the way your writing just flows when i read it, not many people have the gift. Looking forward to the next chapter...hmmm that's for you to know and for me to read ;o)

I'm keeping watch on my computer for the update

Greetzz
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From ANON - Koda on November 01, 2005
faint. That was good. As always.
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