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Reviews for Not Your Usual Love Story

By : JamesRipLily
  • From ANON - scully on October 18, 2005
    awww, first kiss. sweet. :) love the fact that ginny (and unknown others) were betting on the 2 of them. bwhahhaha! classic! im sure everyone but ron is on to them, poor clueless ron. good storytelling, good characterization. keep it up, cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Tashasaphi on October 18, 2005
    Draco is a perrrrrvert

    And I luff him.

    Such a cliffy at the end there! luff luff extreme. Aww that line is so good.

    I know what comes next, of course, but I'm still excitied ^^

    The only thing I suggest is trying to vary sentence beginnings and use of tense, and boost some of those adjectives a little. Variety is the spice of fiction. Other than that, this is spot on.

    *sigh* If I could make PD chapters like this, snappy and to the point, my fans wouldn't hate me so much.

    There's so many little things in here that I can't help but think you've taken from life. Cracks me up XD

    LUFF YOU!

    Tsx
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  • From ANON - Blaze Zelawin on October 18, 2005
    I really love your story!!! The t-shirts are awesome too! This is the first fanfiction I have read in a while that was able to keep my attention the entire time! :)
    Blaze Zelawin
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  • From ANON - scully on October 17, 2005
    ooh, great first chapter! cant wait to read more! loved the t-shirt btw. clever!
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  • From ANON - sodapop0006 on October 17, 2005
    ^_^ I like it! This simply oozes cuteness and fluff and bunnies and I WANT THAT T-SHIRT!!! Lol. Simply adorable, please keep going!
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  • From ANON - roxierose13 on October 17, 2005
    haha, that was great! I really like how you're playing their personalities ^_^ update soon!
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  • From ANON - DarkerHeart on October 17, 2005
    This is actually alot better than I expected. I think you have a really good start. 5 stars! Plz update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2005
    So, is this pink thing a gay cult clue or something? If Snape's there I can manage to be the pink flamingo or something?
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  • From ANON - Tatemshope on October 17, 2005
    I like Harry's shirt! I totally want one of my own! Please keep it up! More Chapters=Longer reviews from me. :)
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on October 17, 2005
    I really like it so far! Can't wait for chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - You know damn right... (Tashasaphi) on October 17, 2005
    Damn straight I do! *does the best beta in the world dance* WOO WOO

    This chapter, before I fiddled with it, was already a brilliantly written example of your best work. There are just little phrases, cleverly integrated words and special, shiny moments that really make this piece stand out in a world of samey bullcrap.

    That, and you make cliches seem brand new ^^


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