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By : LunaGrrl
  • From ANON - Stacy on December 28, 2005
    Great Chapter!
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  • From ANON - Bek Allen on December 28, 2005
    Ooooh! Luna this was a wonderful chapter! From Narcissa's frustration over her letter, right down to Crookshanks. I loved the way you've made it so that it's not some upper-class snob lowering themselves to speak with a commoner, but a mum speaking to another mum. Above all else, mothers and fathers relate to each other that blurs all lines of class and creed. Very well done.

    I especially like the way Hermione had a bit of a paddy over the fact that the letter was from 'That vile woman'. LoL. As a teacher, I've found it more often then not, the kids with the biggest opinions of someone, normally have to be knocked down a peg or two to realise how much of a hypocrite they're being, and you've done this with Hermione. Giving her the time to think and reflect on how two-faced she was being about second chances, made her realize that, her initial thoughts about "letting the ferret up and die", were wrong, even for Draco.

    More importantly, I loved Crookshanks. He is definitely a wonder. And I totally know what Hermione was going on about, talking to her cat. I have a cat and two dogs, and often talk to my golden lab if I'm having a bad day. There is just something in a pet's eyes (any pet, be it Huski, tabby, labrador or part-kneazel), that gives this impression that they truly are listening. I think that's why pets are known to be great for stress relief.

    I cannot wait until you update again. I really do enjoy this fic and can't wait to see where it goes. And, as Crookshanks said... Harry and Ron will get over it eventually.

    Bek
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2005
    i like it i need an update. and an owl.
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  • From ANON - Bek Allen on December 18, 2005
    Luna!

    This was yet another brilliant chapter! I loved the scene with the mirror, Draco's own reflection proved that Draco sees himself as nothing less then a smirking, condescending, arrogant, good looking young man. LoL. Just terrific! I was in a complete fit of giggles for most of the chapter.

    I loved Narcissa trying to break the tension. Just brilliant. Oooh! I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see how her Owl to Mrs. Granger fairs.

    Keep up the excellant work.

    Bek
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  • From ANON - dawn on December 18, 2005
    I was so thrilled to see another chapter this morning! I can't wait to read about the dinner, Hermione finding out is always the best part.
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  • From ANON - anon on December 18, 2005
    Okay I hardly ever review cause I'm lazy, but I LOVED IT!!!!! Definitely can't wait to read more. Especially since it's a Veela story. Veela!Draco (with Hermione as his mate of course) are my favorite stories and there really arent' enough of them around.
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  • From ANON - Bree on November 25, 2005
    Oh I like it! I know this is your first so I want to give you encouragement to keep writing. I love veela stories, and I like where yours is going. Please continue when you can!
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  • From ANON - otokogurui on November 06, 2005
    I'm hooked. Please don't stop, you write really well and I'm impressed. And thank you for either being a good proofreader or having a beta reader.
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  • From ANON - dawn on November 06, 2005
    Must be my lucky day to find another veela fic! You are so right there aren't nearly enough of these. This sounds really great so far, and I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of it!
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on November 06, 2005
    Absolutely Brilliant beginning, please update soon, have added to my favourite list,
    but could you e.mail me when you update please.

    Best wishes.
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  • From ANON - Rhapsody on November 02, 2005
    I just wanted to say that I love your story, it's very well written and the storyline is fabulous. I LOVE Veela!Draco and there are definitely not enough stories out there. Thank You, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - mira on November 02, 2005
    very interesting beginnings. I like how involved Narcissa and Lucius are. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Bek Allen on November 02, 2005
    Me again! LoL.

    I'm so glad this chapter was up for me to read before bed, I've got an early start tomorrow and after such a shoddy day, I needed a lil pick me up. Another amazing chapter Luna, the interaction between Alanis and Lucius was fantastic, I could so clearly see them staring each other down; both of them wary of the other. I absolutely can not wait for chapter four. Even though Hermione and Draco haven't yet made their appearances, it's great the way you've already managed to thicken the plot already. PLEASE!!! Update soon!

    Bek
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2005
    i love it!!! update soon
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  • From ANON - Bek Allen on October 31, 2005
    Another great chapter!

    I love seeing the more human side of Lucius, and a more three dimensional take on Narcissa. I can't wait for the next one to go up...

    Bek

    PS: Nag your Beta! LoL
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