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Reviews for Shutting Her Big Mouth

By : solomru1
  • From ANON - Raxyl on October 18, 2005
    I actually liked it! I'ma big fan of Non-con (Guess that reveals a little too much about my dark side) And I hope to see more from you! ^_^ The plot was good, but that's not all there is to being a writer, in my opinion. There were many parts in the story where you could have avoiding using 'he' and 'she' repetetively... And as many have pointed out, the vocabulary was a bit... off the target... ^_^;; Umm... I suppose that because there are so many stories out there with chapters about 8-12 pages long, I felt somewhat disappointed... But really, it is much better than a lot of crap I've read around...
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  • From ANON - cearrae on October 18, 2005
    Hi! Just wanted you to know I read both versions of your story and the second is far better. I can actually visualize Snape doing this and given his ego...well...you know. I do think you have a spring board to another story or story's. What if Hermione remembers and enjoys or what if Snape want to reprise his fellatio. - Oh, that was my only criticism - Sodomy is up the anus, fellatio is down the throat.
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  • From solomru1 on October 18, 2005
    ok, I added a little more about Snape's thought processes as to what drove him over the edge.
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  • From ANON - SadistSnape on October 18, 2005
    ISHTER:

    Sodomy: Often simply refers to anal sex; however, the actual dictionary definition includes anything considered "unnatural or deviate sexual intercourse" which may include everything from oral sex to sex between partners of the same gender.

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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on October 18, 2005
    Ohhh, that ONE way to shut the big mouth up. Any chance on another encounter at some point?

    Red

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  • From ANON - ishfet on October 18, 2005
    If you can't work out what orifice is used in sodomy you shouldn't use big words.
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  • From ANON - Maria on October 18, 2005
    I agree with Anon's review - but overall, the premise of 'shutting her up' this way is perfect.
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  • From ANON - dryade on October 18, 2005
    I love it! Great! I hope to see more of your stuff!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2005
    Ok, I'm a Snape-addict and a pervert, so I liked it. I'm sure some people will hate this because you've got bad!Snape and no romance/fluff/relationship whatsoever. Personally, I can enjoy most of Snape's erotic incarnations, even the evil ones, as long as the writing isn't atrocious. I prefer like a little more character development in my smut than what you give here -- not necessarily a whole plot, but a sense of who these people really are and why they're acting/reacting in this particular way -- but overall, your writing is pretty good. I'd like to see you do something more in depth.

    Oh, and one last thing--Hermione is obviously unhappy and getting no pleasure from this, so I can't help but wonder why she doesn't bite him. Shouldn't you have Snape either performing a nifty jaw-relaxing spell or promising dire consequences if she doesn't keep her teeth to herself?
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  • From ANON - wheyz on October 18, 2005
    It was a little short, but overall, a pretty good story. :-)
    I think you overused "down her throat" in this fic, but if that's what he was thinking, I guess it's OK.
    I hope to see more from you in the future.
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