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Reviews for Sexy Slytherin

By : Sambre
  • From ANON - ndut on October 26, 2005
    nice! when will u update?
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  • From ANON - ella on October 24, 2005
    ewwww gross gross gross lol that was so funny, i cant wait for the next chapter please update soon, huggles and candy ella xxxxxxxxxx
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  • From ANON - FairyQilan on October 20, 2005
    The horror! Oh the horror!! How could you torture poor Severus like that?!
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  • From ANON - Alexa on October 18, 2005
    I'm sorry, but you really need a beta, or to proof-read your text yourself. Some parts were so difficult to understand, that I finally gave up trying two thirds into the story. And not because I didn't like the story - but because I didn't like how much of a struggle reading it was.

    Examples:

    [He blinked (*his*) eyes stupidly while Pomfrey continued to smooth !!!its!!! hair, and then started to caress the side of his face, going down slowly towards his neck as if she was taking his pulse. The only problem was that he knew the procedure well, i.e. he was placed under magic control and something inside of him warned him that this wasn
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  • From on October 18, 2005
    omg.... poor Sev!
    Teehee, i wonder what really happened int he dungeons...
    Can't wait for more
    Chow for now!
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