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Reviews for Seduced By Darkness

By : MsMatty35

From ANON - kB on December 31, 2005
OMG! really... every single time matty! u always almost leave me speechless... i mean i never really know what to say... (i guess that's one reason why i'm not a writer... always have trouble with words! )

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Her hair was long, down to the middle of her back. It was golden brown and it curled silkily at the bottom. Her eyes were striking, they looked like Honey, they slanted like a cat?s eyes, and she had thick dark gold eyelashes. Her lips where round, full and always looked cherry red.
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what a beautiful description for a beautiful lady... i got u pictured all in my head! i sooo love how u said u got this exotic look! very nice!

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?Death Eaters! HERE!? A villager was screaming.
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WHOA! when i read that, it felt like someone really shouted it... weird huh?

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Professor Snape dragged her behind him and roughly got Neville up by his winter robe?s collar, ?Get away from here,? He hissed and when Neville didn?t move fast enough to suit him he pushed him, ?NOW Longbottom and take Miss Olmo with you.?
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ahh... good 'ol proffessor snape.. wonder what u've got up in his sleeve this time... who u gonna pair him with? do i smell a LOVE TRIANGLE? pure speculation here... BWEHEHEHEHE....

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?Aw, baby Longbottom out to get revenge for his pathetic parents??
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GRRR!!! i wanna kick her sorry ARSE!!!!!! I LOATHE HER! and she called u a biatch! that BIATCH! good thing u burned her stupid face!

you know that whole part with lucius and tom, where tom asks about snape's loyalty, and when lucius bowed down.... i was nervous! really! u just made it soo believable..

then, i know tom is evil, but he's soo HOT!

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She had put such force into the spell that Bellatrix was thrown up and backwards against the Shack. He was impressed, as he could feel a very strong power emanating from her.
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HA! to bellatrix... and omg! tom saw you! he saw you!!!!! i can FEEL it already... it's STARTING!!! BWEHEHEHE...

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Bring her to me, unspoiled, do you understand me Lucius
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Oooo.... what is he gonna do to her?? huh? huh?

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But now, with this face and his dark eyes, it was even more chilling for he was so deceptively beautiful that it was easy to let your guard down around him.
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DAYUM!!! BEST LINE EVER!!! that's all i'm gonna say!

matty, THANK YOU!!!
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From ANON - Riyo on December 31, 2005
OMG, I started reading this just now and I can not stop! It is beautifull Matty. This is gonna be so bad for my studying... I'll let you know more about what I think about it once I am finished... But so far I just love it. So nice and dark .
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From ANON - Robyn on December 31, 2005
Ok, this be only the third FF I've ever read (don't have enough time), but would you mind if I printed this out? Purely for myself and no other. It's so good, and I don't get a big amount of time online at once usually. So I'd love to print it all out, and read it at night in bed when I get the chance.

I think it's THAT good. Cannot wait to read the rest!

I read the first eight chapters. LOVED it!!!!!! Can you see me happy? I am Definitely happy. And yeah, I spied lots of Lucius. Enough to make me happy. Love your story. And haven't a Single thing to critisize about. Your'e doing splendidly! Now to print out the rest!
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From ANON - Nicole on December 31, 2005
By far the best first chapter of a Harry Potter fic that I've read. Matty, your descriptions are incredible! From the initial view of the castle to the detailed portrait of a handsome, young, naked man, you had me instantly hooked.

I should hate Tom. I really should. He's horrible. The way he keeps Bellatrix around seemingly just for a quick fuck to the sex and murder of muggles. He does everything because he can and because it gives him a huge sense of complete control. He is powerful. But yet, I don't hate him. In fact, I like him.

Bellatrix must have more than one reason to stay. Is he forcing her to stay? She's loyal but is she bound to him forever? If any of this is in the most recent book, forgive me because I have not read any of it. It's also been nearly two years since the rest of the books as well.

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From ANON - kB on December 31, 2005
Chapter 1 ::::

ok... just to let you know how much i ENJOY reading your fics, i've got two browsers up rite now, one for this reply, and the other for the actual fic.. u see, while i read, i add my reply, so that i don't forget what i wanna say... hehehe... anyhoo...

OMG! just reading the first few paragraphs that has bellatrix, I HATE her already.. well, i do hate her coz from OotP, but then, GRRRRRRRRR!!!! see how much u affect me with ur writing matty?? that only goes to show u'r doing great with this story telling...

ok.. moving on to other things, i just wanna say this before i forget... i'm sooooo impressed (and of course i bowdown) coz matty, u'r very descriptive.. and i like that alot... because with that, i can see and imagine more in my head whatever it is ur tryin to tell... the fact that i am no writer, i appreciate these things very much...so, i hope u'll never sell urself short and think for even one minute that u suck at writing or that one of us will not like ur stories, bcoz, well, that just ain't gonna happen! ok, enough babble...

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on one of it?s small balconies stood a young man, he could be no more than twenty five years old. He had a loosely tied silk robe around his otherwise naked frame. The wind was playing with his black hair and caressing his beautiful face. High cheek bones, thick eyelashes, a straight aristocratic nose and full lips framed his features. He was tall, his skin tanned, his body lean and fit. He had an intense look about him, a determined gleam in his eyes, his jaw was set and he seemed deep in thought.
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sorry.. i just had to put that whole thing in... WOMAN! that was... i mean u were just describing him, and my mind's already going...

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Then he killed them, sometimes with Avada Kadavra, other times he seemed to enjoy it more if he did it with his hands.
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ok... i know i was just gushing about him... then this i read... so CREEPY!!!

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I will deal with those who fail and come back with us in my own way.?
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gaakkk..

omg... that was dark matty.. didn't realize when u told me in chat... GREAT JOB!

ok... gotta go read the second chap!

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From ANON - SeverinaSnape on December 28, 2005
Hi there - I havent managed to login to my account here thanks to probs with the password... so this is it, my review...

From the first paragraph I am pulled into your story. Your fine attention to details paints a vivid picture. The chararacterisations are richly drawn - and we have a keen sense of the dynamics between Riddle and Bellatrix. Bella's 'loyalty' to her man is blind - she takes issue with other women when it the man she is a slave to that she should take issue with - that and just how much she allows herself to be used. She allows herself to be used knowing that she is being used. A marvelous insight into her charachter. It is striking that one who can outwardly seem so strong is actually quite weak. And this weakness makes her despised by the one she adores. Love and Voldemort are not naturally symbiotic - so Bella has been deluding herself lo these many years. I love the start to what I think will be an excellent fic. I give it the highest rating possible. Much deserved. Sev
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From ANON - Aileen on December 27, 2005
I really enjoy your story. I haven't read something with as much passion as this for a while. Keep up the great work and I look forward to later chapters! :)
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From ANON - Anon on December 25, 2005
I can't believe it! I LOVE your story. It was just the way you wrote Tom Riddle, how he didn't exactly change, but you depicted him as a human, as Dumbledore saw him to be. He still has the same beliefs, alwas will, but he learned to love.

Claudia and him still have a LONG way to go. There'll be a lot of dark times. But I feel like the story's about to end. Will there be a sequel? ::crosses figers for a sequel:: =]

But right now all I'm thinking is a hot Tom, naked and horny, and his wife. Plus ice cream.. YUM!

Come back here soon!.
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From ANON - PhantasmBunny on December 17, 2005
heehee. the weird food requests. is she pregnant??? O.O
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From ANON - PhantamBunny on November 29, 2005
:D i can't wait to see what Tom does at the Olmo House ... and kind of hope he doesn't flip at Claudia since it really wasn't her fault at all, and i imagine he'd be smart enough to figure that one out (but then again, such spats *do* make for dramatic influence... mrrf O_o). but yes, awaiting Chapter 20 with bells and tambourines and much rejoicing. ^_^
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From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2005
more please. :D
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From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2005
this is excellent
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From ANON - PhantasmBunny on November 21, 2005
eee! i love this fanfic (really not enough sympathetic Tom Riddle fanfic out there)! please, please, please write some more! pretty please?? @_@
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From ANON - jlee on November 21, 2005
holy crap, this is quite possibly the best harry potter fanfic i've read in a LONG time. updatE!!!!
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From on November 20, 2005
I really do love all the Slytherins in this story. I hope Harry kicks some serious Voldemort ass. I think Tom and Claudia make a perfect couple, i just hope she convences her parents of that.
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