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Reviews for ForgivenHatred

By : TomFeltonsLuva
  • From HeartStar on August 23, 2012
    interesting more please>...
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  • From harryhollow on January 04, 2006
    poor harry please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Storm on November 01, 2005
    Hopefully you get your computer fixed soon, it's a good story with a lot of potential and I can't wait to see where you take it. I hope you do continue this. Spell-check would help in reading though, it's a little difficult and distracting to figure out which word you wanted. Or perhaps a beta to look over it with you to help with misspellings. Hope you continue this soon.
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  • From ANON - Alicia on November 01, 2005
    This is horrible. You should learn to write before you post anything.
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  • From TomFeltonsLuva on November 01, 2005
    hey yall i am having some really bad computer problesm so i cant continue the story.. I am really sorry! i have 54 chaps written out already b/c it hasnt ben workin... i am at the library rite now and really probably shouldnt be on b/c theyre gona think in weird.. But ill try to somehow get it on...thanx....and
    its is only this story for some reason... my comp wont transfer it.. i am really poed w/ it...
    just thote id tell yall
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  • From TomFeltonsLuva on October 23, 2005
    thanx .. yeah the first chap isnt finished but i am having loading problems so i have to type it in the spot.. Make it really hard.. But ill try!!! Thanx!
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  • From TomFeltonsLuva on October 23, 2005
    i am going to probably update tomorrow i was at shows all weekend...sorrry!! but i wrote more of it in the car so its up to 22 pages!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2005
    Dude, good plot line, but you really need to use spell check. It's kind of hard to read as is, correct spelling will make it much better. If you don't have one, there are several on the web that you can use, just google for them.
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  • From ANON - ice owl on October 21, 2005
    Personally, I think you should take this down, fix the errors, and maybe even write more as a beginning chapter. It has potential but needs a lot more work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2005
    Ummmm..... Ok lets see: There are words that are not even close to being spelled right. I don't know if thats a formatting problem you had when you uploaded it, but either way you should always go to the page and read your story to make sure everything uploaded correctly. Also the story is extremely lacking detail adn of course I hope you will elaborate more as you continue. Hope you find to continue.


    Good Luck
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  • From TomFeltonsLuva on October 20, 2005
    Thanx! i have a huge stroy
    written but i have a really busy schedul and not a lot of time of the
    comp.. So i am trying to typ it all! thanx for the review and ill try ta update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From TomFeltonsLuva on October 20, 2005
    So what da ya think?
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  • From ANON - Jenna on October 20, 2005
    I think you have a good idea for a story, but you might want to be more specific. Give more details and more of an explanation.That kind of thing. Also, spell check would be great. Don't give up, you have a good start.
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