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Reviews for FAMILY TIES

By : tas
  • From Annecia89 on June 30, 2014
    Absolutely loved it!!
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  • From ANON - shey on September 21, 2013
    Chapter 13 -
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  • From Draeconin on April 16, 2009
    Bird wings? With feathers? Where, in the human, elven, and/or vampiric genes do birds come in? They're not related to mammals, at all. Furred wings, such as are found in bats, would be far more believable. Then you have Harry ignore certain statements that *should* have had him asking very pointed questions on at least two occasions: the first being when Bree told Harry that his ears were being hidden by a glamor (and ignores how the true shape couldn't be felt). And then when Harry wakes the first time in his new bedroom, he doesn't have to search for the bathroom, despite not having been shown it. You ignore the details at the detriment of your story.

    But in general, this is a good story, so far.
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  • From tohru80 on January 11, 2009
    This story was brilliant. I couldn't stop reading. The development of Harry's character was amazing to see. I love how you wove the characters around each other. The family bond between Harry and Severus was not only original, but the way you did it made it very believable. Many times when Severus is suddenly some long lost relation to Harry, it turns out dry and predictable(long lost brother of Lily seems to usually be the theme). I loved how you brought them around to the idea of being related slowly. It tends to aggravate me when they just accept each other suddenly with open arms. The hesitancy and slowly growing affection for each other was refreshing to see.
    The sexual encounters were intense and very satisfying. I enjoyed being able to read a story that not only had lots of yummy sex scenes but that there was a true plot to the story as well.
    This story was very well written and I loved the plot. Not something I have read a million times already. Wonderful. I really must see what else you have archived here.
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  • From thatsreallynifty on January 01, 2009
    This has to be one of my favorite stories that you have written.
    You are a great writer.
    Nice work! ~ Keep it up!
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  • From bumblebee on October 05, 2007
    LOVE IT!! just LOVE IT!!
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  • From ChibiDragoonrose on September 30, 2007
    Kyaaaaa!!! I love the epiloge. I wish you'd have written in details though; the time lapse is quite long and i love preggy dray :D. Also, more sev x hermonie would be nice (although i prefer sev with either remus or sirius or in threesome *cackles with evil glint in the eyes*). Although harry doesn't seem that angry about his childhood, i wish there'd be more drama to that. I guess the fic would be more gripping. Anyway, i really enjoy this and please continue writing, k. Ja ne. :D
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  • From anniea on June 05, 2007
    i thought it was very well written. there wasn't a real dom in the story so it was different for me.
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  • From cloudydayz on May 20, 2007
    I forgot to review this the first time I read it, I think. I absolutely love this fic! It is one of my favorite HP/DM fics (I've read a lot of them, especially the longer one's so that's saying quite a bit). I reread this and off-handedly decided to check if you'd written anything else. Much to my surprise you have many other stories! I am off to read them all. Thank you very much for the time you put into writing fanfics. I am sure I will enjoy reading them on this lazy afternoon! Thanks again.
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  • From Leentjef on March 06, 2007
    thank you for writing it it wwas a very very good one
    keep writing and post
    bye bye
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  • From misslala on March 03, 2007
    w0000t! Ok, I found this on chance and I am so glad I did. What a wonderfully smutty and woven tale. Normally I don't get into the male pregnant stories, but this one is excellent. I love how erotic Rider and Ash are with Harry and how eventually Draco too becomes such a sexy part of the tale. Thanks for sharing this. It's truly brilliant.
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 01, 2007
    Fantastic! I just had to reread it!
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  • From redheadfaerie on March 01, 2007
    Hmmm, so that was weird. Just after I finished reading chapter 18 on the Silver /snitch I came to see the updates here and noticed that this has been here as well! Just wanted to say that it was a nice story, and I liked it.
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  • From ANON - Ladybug452000 on November 08, 2006
    Brilliant just....wow.....brilliant CHEERS AND TWO THUMBS UP!!! :)
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  • From ANON - MilkShake on December 01, 2005
    Tough that type of bat has altered incisors the mythical creatures are (usually) portrayed with elongated K-9
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