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Reviews for Threesome (plus special guests)

By : lilvior
  • From ANON - Marchatorium on October 26, 2005
    Good Ending! XD

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  • From ANON - Gwennafran on October 23, 2005
    Hey forget about the mistakes. They don
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  • From ANON - dragon34 on October 22, 2005
    that was really cool. I thought it was Lilly, instead of Molly. I would love to read another potterverse story from you.
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  • From ANON - Morigel on October 22, 2005
    Several correcting to your story: you wrote, that Severus is 16 - it means we are somewhere around 1976. Heavy metal i OK, it started around 1970 or a little later (suggestion for the band: Judas Priest). But you messed up the clothing. Metal fans of that time did not wear big trousers. They wear it as tight as possible. I'm not sure about the chains, it seems wrong. Severus had spikes in his hair in your story - another mistake, in 1976 men wear their hair free. Concept of a Gothic girl first appeared somewhere around 1985, or even later. And the piercings. Now it's common, but surely not then.
    Last thing: you have the age of Bellatrix quite right, but not Molly, she is older. In 1976 she is around 30 and already is maried and has children.
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