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Reviews for The Final Threshold

By : Sarmoti
  • From ANON - Aunt Bijou on October 24, 2005
    That's the thing about writing, love. Sometimes, the characters get away from you, and do what they want to do, no matter how hard you try to get them to fit in your outline of how YOU think the story should go. Stubborn little gits, characters. Even if they're someone else's characters. Hard to rope the little critters in. You did a fine job, regardless. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Tygerlily [Not Signed In] on October 23, 2005
    Amazing, simply amazing and you can have Lucius ooc anytime you want. I personally would love to see another story following Hermione and Lucius in the beginnings of their relationship and the reaction of others. I know that Ron might have left Hermione to be with someone not so 'bookish' like Luna but I think he'd have a fit if she were to end up with Lucius after having been dumped by him. It'd be interesting to see.

    Either way, loved it!
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  • From ANON - Shilohdarke on October 23, 2005
    I think that Lucius is a flexible character. He is not as set in stone as Severus, or Ron and Harry, because he is not used as often. To keep him in character, you need only portray him as a very well spoken, proper pureblood with access to very powerful magic. I think you did very well with this story as well as the first. I don't understand though, How come you didn't just add this story as a second chapter to the first? I think you should make this story more than just one chapter sequels. It is a good plot idea, and could be so much more, if you gave it the chance.
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  • From InfernalParadise on October 23, 2005
    Honestly, I don't think he actually got much out of character. Lucius always acts arrogantly and cooly, so we might never know what he's like when in love and happy. Maybe that's how he'd be, then. Anyway... the sequel was great!! I loved it!! :)
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