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Reviews for Guilty as Sin

By : harriet
  • From ANON - Nitogumi on December 13, 2005
    Man, that was such a good story.
    But really...the ending sucked.
    It was anticlimactic and droll.
    I'm dissappointed.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2005
    you should have a sepuaL
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  • From ANON - woof on December 13, 2005
    OK, so it didn't end 'happily ever after'. Still a satisfactory ending with no loose threads, however the sadist in me would have liked to see Draco screaming in childbirth! Good story and worth re-reading!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 13, 2005
    I'm not dissappointed and you have every reason to be proud of your story. I'm glad you didn't turn it even darker. Like any good story though, I wonder..... So Harry only had one son? I was hoping he had more, but then again considering what they have to go through when gestating it probably made sense. Harry mentioned sending his oldest off to school so I was wondering if he had more or if he and Draco shared the two sons. Also, considering how warm and friendly Snape was with Dumbledore, it was a bit dissippointing that he was still so mean and miserable with his Inferi. Yes, the dom thing is part of their persona, but after a dozen years and children together couldn't they have gotten to a place where Harry was more than just contented with his scars because he had even less growing up? Great sex does not hold a family together, inferi instincts aside. I congratulate you on finishing your story. I'll be the first to say I can't write for anything and you have written lots (I know because I read everything you write!), remember it's not a flame just one readers pet quirk. Take lots of bows and enjoy the feeling of accomplishment. I will read anything else you write!
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  • From ANON - mestyna on December 13, 2005
    yay!! XD I loved that story from head to toes! For one minute I feared for Harry's life though *lol* but as always you've put a hell of a plot in this one; Don't change anything! It's really perfect (even if now I'm curious to see how they live once that they're finally settled)

    maybe now you could concentrate in finishing your other fictions *lol* >>

    I hope to see more of that writtings of yours ! XDDD
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  • From ANON - marajade179 on December 13, 2005
    Exellent story!! I realy enjoyed keeping up with it these past few weeks. There were several points in the story where I didn't much like Draco eather and kind of wished him and Harry wen't equal. I am sorry to see this story end but I am looking forward to your next story whatever that maybe.

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  • From ANON - Nicole on December 13, 2005
    "Personally I really hated Draco in this one"

    Oh I'm glad you said that, because I really hated draco in this one as well. Other than that, it was great
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  • From ANON - ThexChosenxOne on December 13, 2005
    I really didn't like Draco being in this story, but the rest I loved alot!!! I do wish that you continued but it was a happy ending. That was a fantastic story, I hope you write more like that! ^.^ I'm looking forward to your other great stories
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  • From ANON - SilverPhoenix on December 13, 2005
    omg im actually crying...i dont want it to be over...i really dont...i really really loved this and i cant bloody believe that im crying...would it be possible that there would be a sequel? one where Draco gets killed *cough*...dont get me wrong, i loved Draco lol, but i dont like Draco/Severus..and they had a kid *pouts*...im still crying...please do a sequel..plwaseeee, my heart is broken cuz its over...i have some questiongs though..whos heather? and is Severus aloud to hit the kids like he does Harry and Draco?...lol well this was retarted review..but i hope that you can see that i really loved it...its my favourite Harry/Severus fic *nods*..(im stll crying)...well i better go lol..i do hope thats theres a sequel, to learn more about Harry and Dracos sons, and Draco getting killed *cough* (i can not believe im asking htat:O i love Draco)...talk to you later ;) *hugs you* thank you so much for writing this!
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  • From ANON - Rejachan_saiyajin on December 13, 2005
    Your story was incredible! I was always so excited when you had put up new chapters. I loved it so much and I even cried at a few parts, but the plot and use of it was....well words can hardly describe this work of art! I have read other stories of yours long back and I always left my own reviews on them too. But this takes them all away. I wish you could write another one of these. I would simple adore it! An incredible inspriation to us all if I do say so myself, so many ideas that would flourish with your story! Again incredible story and a whomping ending!
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  • From ANON - Globuuli on December 13, 2005
    I absolutely loved this! Harry and Severus were great, Severus's dominance sent shivers down my spine at times, just lovely. I didn't even dislike Draco at all, mainly felt sorry for him for being a bit of a third feel in his family. I would've expected for them to have more children when the story jumped twelve years forward, but that's just me. I suppose you're finished with this universe for now, but I do hope to see a sequel sometime, or maybe some snapshots from their life during those twelve years... Thanks for not killing any of them, I had gotten quite attached to the family of monsters. And BIG thanks for sharing this with us!
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  • From ANON - canis_major on December 13, 2005
    WOW!!! Your stories just keep getting better and better. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Wombat on December 13, 2005
    lol, ah you rock socks, definitly one of my fave authors. I do agree about the Draco thing though, I didn't HATE him, he just kinda....got in the way a bit... but thats probably just cause I'm a Snarry freak and can't help but think of him as an ntruder... Trying not to make this a desperate plea, but please keep writing....please. I actually do look forward to your updates (I'm past caring how sad this makes me sound ;o)) So cheers. Nu xxx
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  • From ANON - lilith on December 13, 2005
    Well... the ending is quite fluffy... but I liked it nontheless. How did you want to end it, though? Killing Harry during birth? I don't know if I had liked that better. I was a bit disappointed about Snape conspirating with Dumbledore. It means Harry has still been manipulated till the end, and he isn't even aware of it.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on December 13, 2005
    Congratulations on anotehr wonderful read! I know you say that you hated DRaco in this, but I beg to differ. He really helped things along and Harry would have been lost without him. To bad he only had a chance to have a baby outside of teh lines of teh story. Would have been fun watching him whine while giving birth! Good luck to your muse! I can't wait to read your next offering!
    Take Care!
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