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Reviews for Guilty as Sin

By : harriet
  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2005
    Hi, Riffraff.
    I loved "Guilty as Sin." One of the reasons -I'm a sucker for good story-lines that often are a li-ttle difficult for some readers to stomach, and endings that give you this warm, fuzzy feeling.
    The biggest reason though, is just that, I loved it. Doesn't make sense, but that's the way it is. I don't know how many readers out there agree with me, ('cuz I wasn't quite the careful reader reading the same chapter over and over to check for underlines and errors-I never am when I really like a story) but "Guilty as Sin" pushed my buttons the right way, all along. The 'weave' of the story stitching the violence and fluff together was subtle enough, I never really thought of it the way you sometimes mentioned in your A/Ns.

    I hated Draco too! He was such a brat. - Totally necessary, if you ask me. His brattiness made Snape's snits seem all the more glorious, and Harry all the more... well, you know.

    Now. I've read and reviewed, told you what I thought of the ending (I think I did). As to what I'd like to see next... I think I'll take anything that comes 'from your keyboard'! Nothing is *NOT* cliche, I mean, how long has mankind been daydreaming about fucking their neighbor, or the neighbor's dog? Or wondering, "why the hell did that end right there?" ... Cliche or no, I would much rather read your next fic soon, than wait half a decade while you go hunting for something new.

    Ugh!
    That was one hell of a long review. So, in case you've forgotten what I wrote in the beginning, I've summed it up.
    - I loved your story, the ending, the way Draco was all bratty because it made the other leading roles more appealing, and that I'd love to see your next fic, as soon as possible, if I had any say. >u/ with luv, nickel
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  • From ANON - SarryMatts on December 13, 2005
    That has to be your best fic, I've been hooked the entire tiem and no wtats its over I don't want it to end *sniffs* oh well, I can always read it again...and again...and again...and again...and again...and again...and again...and again...

    Yeah i think you get the point ^_^ Great job!
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  • From ANON - Bumble_Bee on December 13, 2005
    Well... what a story!! I most definately didn't hate it as I believe that it is impossible for me to hate anything that you write. As for Draco, I can't say that I liked him much either - but that is possibly due to the fact that I can't (willingly) see him with anyone other than Snape =D The concept for the story was unique, and I liked the way that we could see that despite the way he acted some of the time - heck, most of the time - Snape really did care for Harry and Draco, more so Harry methinks! Overall I commend this story and your fabulous writing ability! It is not only the quality of your stories that keep me coming back for more but your ability to update with a certain regularity. Authors who leave weeks and months between updates lose ireader nterest in their stories but fortunately that doesn't happen to you! All I can say is well done and I eargerly await your next 'novel' =D
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  • From ANON - kastra on December 13, 2005
    Totally loved it. Definitely a new and interesting idea. Draco did grate on me a bit, but he was a good foil for Harry's character. I did keep wondering if you were planning on killing Draco off in the end, but he survived. :) Overall a great story and I will miss looking forward to updates.
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  • From ANON - JiyuHatellKodai on December 13, 2005
    LOVED IT!! Though, they should have had more kids. XD
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  • From ANON - angel on December 13, 2005
    Mixed Feelings..... I liked the snape/harry bit, nay loved, but all through it i hated draco. i was secretly hoping you'd kill him off, as he was giving me the shits. plus i'm a real hard arse bitch who hates sharing, i was harry could have snape all to his little ownsome. i wouldn't have even been heart broken if you'd killed off the kid, but hell oh well. i still loved it, it was a wild ride!! so i can't wait to see what you come up with next! snape/harry??? plz?!?!?!
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  • From ANON - Brad on December 13, 2005
    I'm sad to see it end. I loved thisand look forward to anything else that you write. I have been very hard to please as of late, and I can safly say that this is one of only a few fics that I have read in the past few months that I haven't wanted to track down the author and ask how they could post such crap on the internet. Anyway, all those things aside, I likexd the characters, though I must agree that Draco as a character seemed a little underdeveloped.
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  • From ANON - Noir Black on December 13, 2005
    *Crying* It's over! This has been one of the best HP fics that have come out in a long while. You kept most of the characters in IC. I'm sad that it is finished now as there aren't many fics I'm willing to read. I'm so going to recomend this fic to those that are willing to read it.
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  • From ANON - SMercury on December 13, 2005
    This has got to be one of the best well written Snape/Harry/Draco fics I've ever read. It was such a thrill reading this and I can't wait for another fic from you. This was definately amazing and you've done a wonderful job writing this fic. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - jillypooh on December 13, 2005
    I didn't hate Draco but I really wanted to smack him on numerous occasions. I had two questions: Who are Bartholemew and Arnold's mums? And what was that prophecy that Albus and Sev were chatting about? You managed tio hold my interest in this story, even though it squicked me a bit in places. I enjoyed this as almost as much as Where Others Fear to Tread, which remains one of my all time favorite fics. I look forward to your next story, you write snarky Sev better than anybody. I'd enjoy your take on Mentor!Snape or even a Severitus. (hint, hint, hint) Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Storm on December 13, 2005
    Such a great story. So happy yet so sad to see it end. Such a great job! Can't wait to read more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Moit on December 13, 2005
    Man. This story is hot as fuck. lol It reminds me of Indago, which I am also avidly reading. Mmm. The only thing better than Draco/Harry is Draco/Harry/Severus. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2005
    It was different and I loved it.
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  • From ANON - louisa on December 13, 2005
    decent plot lines, a good story.
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  • From ANON - Morgan LeFay on December 13, 2005
    I absolutely loved it!!!! It does have potential for continuation....Snape and the new trio at school and Harry and Draco in Hogsmeade---possibly more siblings.....hint hint!!
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