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Reviews for Guilty as Sin

By : harriet
  • From ANON - Lakoma on December 13, 2005
    I adored this story. At times I would squirm in my chair as I read it--some of the things you wrote were squiky (at least to me!) Overall, the story was great. It flowed, you smoothly brought in new characters and explained the goings on with ease. It was delightful to read and I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.

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  • From on December 13, 2005
    Loved the end of the story it was a great ending
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  • From ANON - Remus Malachi Wolf on December 13, 2005
    Personally, I loved how you portrayed every character. There were times when I flinched from the ways of the Elith-Furatu, specifically the Superei. Lucius's death also left me a bit shaken. And Draco's loss of child as well. The connection formed between Draco and Harry was touching really. They held the same traits as before when they fought in school, but also they leaned on eachother for both moral and emotional support as they were both experiencing something entirelly foreign and Snape just isn't the type to comfort. ^^ A sequel would be interesting, but I'm not requesting one. Paris seems like a good kid and I'd love to learn more about him. Anyway, I've wasted too much of your time telling you about your own story. In short, I adored this story and followed it like a hound until it was finished. Fabulous work!!
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  • From ANON - Remus Malachi Wolf on December 13, 2005
    Personally, I loved how you portrayed every character. There were times when I flinched from the ways of the Elith-Furatu, specifically the Superei. Lucius's death also left me a bit shaken. And Draco's loss of child as well. The connection formed between Draco and Harry was touching really. They held the same traits as before when they fought in school, but also they leaned on eachother for both moral and emotional support as they were both experiencing something entirelly foreign and Snape just isn't the type to comfort. ^^ A sequel would be interesting, but I'm not requesting one. Paris seems like a good kid and I'd love to learn more about him. Anyway, I've wasted too much of your time telling you about your own story. In short, I adored this story and followed it like a hound until it was finished. Fabulous work!!
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  • From ANON - Remus Malachi Wolf on December 13, 2005
    Personally, I loved how your portrayed every character. There were times when I flinched from the ways of the Elith-Furatu, specifically the Superei. Lucius's death also left me a bit shaken. And Draco's loss of child as well. The connection formed between Draco and Harry was touching really. They held the same traits as before when they fought in school, but also they leaned on eachother for both moral and emotional support as they were both experiencing something entirelly foreign and Snape just isn't the type to comfort. ^^ A sequel would be interesting, but I'm not requesting one. Paris seems like a good kid and I'd love to learn more about him. Anyway, I've wasted too much of your time telling you about your own story. In short, I adored this story and followed it like a hound until it was finished. Fabulous work!!
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  • From ANON - Dixiebell on December 12, 2005
    No! No!(wrapping myself around your legs) I don't want it to be over! I have looked forward to every chapter with breathless excitment and I hate the fact that I won't have it to look forward to anymore. I'm one of those readers who love wip's but I just hate it when it's over. Thank you so much for writing this and I will miss it. Please tell me you have another fic on the burner ready to post.

    Dixiebell
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  • From ANON - spikeprop on December 12, 2005
    I absolutely LOVED this fic. You kept me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next part the entire time. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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  • From ANON - Squallsama on December 12, 2005
    Wow! Well... you finally finished a fic--that in itself is a feat! ^_~ But this fic was quite moving in and of itself! I loved it^_^ I have to say I kind of agree about Draco.... once or twice I expected you to kill him off... but I think one of the reasons was because you favored the Severus/Harry pairing too much and adding a third, kid of off-handedly was a little difficult. It seemed maybe it was kind of last minute to keep him in the triangle maybe. I do have to say that I wasn't too fond of the constant 'Snape' and not 'Severus'. But I can see the reason why too. The relationship between Severus, Harry and Draco not exactly personal or warm. But it ended quite well and I have to say adorably^_^ The little boy I imagined their son to become, the cutest little kid in the world.^_^ Great job, I'm glad you finished it!
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  • From ANON - Meamz on December 12, 2005
    I loved the story. Can't wait to see what you write next.
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  • From ANON - Osaki on December 12, 2005
    I feel vaugly cheated....I dont know if I liked the end of the story, but then again, I couldnt tell you if I liked the story to begin with.....Good job though. Youve dont something Im sure ill never do; finish a story. Yay! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Angel the Devil's Daughter on December 12, 2005
    OMG i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this story was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! there should so be a sequel about their kids at hogwarts and how they deal with being an "unforgiven" (ect). loved it!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2005
    I loved your story I hope you write more like this in the future I love stories when harry has a mate(s) The only thing I dont like about your stories in general is it takes to long to get to the plot. I understand you want to introduce the characters and set the tone and so on but I want to get to the plot and you are kind of just wandering around for 5 chapters or so, but after that your stories are amazing keep writting!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2005
    The ending was too sudden. I guess I just wanted the story to continue. I wanted a happy ending for Draco and Harry and everyone. Draco's life depressed me. He was like a slave for Snape and Harry and he wasn't even really wanted - Snape just took him for Harry's sake. I guess I wanted to have an ending where Draco's life doesn't suck. I was more sad about Draco's life than Harry's. Happy endings make me want to read a story over and over again. Depressing stories prevent me from that. So I wanted a happy ending so that I could read it over and over again. I really liked the beginning and middle. Oh, and more sex would have been fun (hehe). Pay me no mind....
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  • From ANON - Ashley on December 12, 2005
    I really liked it. It had a very good plot and I really liked your characterization of Harry. Good Job!
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  • From ANON - Alexandra on December 12, 2005
    i loved it very much it ws sad that draco had to lose a baby twice though thankyou for killing lucious(sp?)
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