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Reviews for Guilty as Sin

By : harriet
  • From ANON - meestyna on November 10, 2005
    well, I'm not against sci-fi once in a while, it adds something original to the plot (not that it wasn't...)
    man, I really wish for Dumbledore and Voldemort to kill each other!
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on November 10, 2005
    Bloody brilliant, you just keep getting better. Additive writing.
    Best wishes.
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  • From ANON - Darkladyd on November 09, 2005
    Hehehehe, I noticed the mood swings begining! Now all you have to do, is go to the "take one look at your mate, and brust out crying for no reason", and the "slam him against the wall and snog him sensless, then walk away" moods! (Hehe, my husband said I had the strangest mood swings when I was preggy).

    Another great update!


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  • From ANON - Mashell on November 09, 2005
    Wicked awesome!
    I really can't wait to
    see what happens next!
    The suspense is killing me.
    I love this new twist, and the
    sence of Hogwart's distrution was
    way to neat. I could just picture the
    dark, crumbling, and diserted halls. I
    can't beliee Hogwart's is gone. *Sniffles*
    Please update soon oh gracious one!

    Mashell
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  • From ANON - alliekatgal on November 09, 2005
    Excellent chapters! I love how complicated it has quickly become. Now we know why Severus was stock piling food and blankets and such. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2005
    wow.. the atack begins... that was a good chappie, can't wait for the next
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  • From ANON - Lothirielwen on November 09, 2005
    Here I am trying to get caught up on the last six chapters that I needed to read when you post another three!!!
    YAY!!!!


    Great fic
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  • From ANON - tessa3 on November 09, 2005
    *shakes head* man... i swear.. this fic gets better each time i read it.. please continue.. i want to see how this all ends.. and i hope there are more plans and bitchiness abound.. and another thing.. Draco is soooooo submissive.. is that what happens when one of the break?? Inferi i mean.. cause if so.. i swear.. i truly hope Har don't break but tone down a little at least *nodding*
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  • From ANON - Dixiebell on November 09, 2005
    I just live for your updates. I can't tell you how many times a day I check just to see if you've updated. I've been reading "Indago" as well, they are very similar, but this one is finally going in a completely different direction. I love them both. I have encouraged LdDurham to read yours and maybe you'll give hers a try. http://www.skyehawke.com/archive/story.php?no=10132&PHPSESSID=d71be81aa3aaa5b59fce925d2c8b0ed5 I guess great minds think alike, and I couldn't be happier! Looking forward to more.

    Dixiebell
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  • From ANON - momoko on November 09, 2005
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on November 09, 2005
    What's Snape up to? Placing Harry with muggles. Something RiffRaff isn't
    telling us. Get some sleep without drink related and then you'll have the strength
    to update soon. Best wishes.
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  • From ANON - fairypoet on November 09, 2005
    MUST ,,,have...MORE...ahhhhhhhhhh

    mOREE!
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  • From ANON - takadoushi on November 09, 2005
    Okay where to begin. XD I literally sat down yesterday and read all your chapters from top to bottom. That is amazing because I haven't read any Snape/Harry/Draco fanfics in a while, because quite literally they were boring to me and badly written. So I just stopped for a while and attacked another grouping of fics. Your fic is indeed very well written, thought out, amazing, and captivating. Kind of reptitive there... oh well. I can't wait to find out what happens. *squeels* It is so interesting. Update more and more.
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  • From ANON - Julianna on November 08, 2005
    Hi! I'm really enjoying this story so far. I love how snarky/manipulative Snape is. I can definitely see him acting this way were he put in this kind of situation in canon. I'm really enjoying the interaction between Draco and Harry. Plot wise, it makes a great behaviour contrast to show Inferei/Inferei interaction and then show Inferei/Superei interaction like you have done. (Though I feel sorry for poor Draco's bum! *g*)

    Your writing style is great and very easy to follow; however, there are a few technical errors that, when fixed, would make it even better. You frequently use a possessive 's on the end of plural nouns (auror's instead of aurors), and I've noticed a couple their/they're and accept/except errors. This is not huge, but it's definitely something a beta should catch and correct for you. I don't want to seem overly critical, but your writing is too good to have minor grammar flaws detracting from your plot.

    That being said, I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next!



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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2005
    ooo more of Snapes interesting plans lol it was an interesting chapter... can't wait to see what happens next
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