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Reviews for Guilty as Sin

By : harriet
  • From ANON - Mashell on November 01, 2005
    Great adition! So Harry's coming into Season and he might
    get preggers huh? Well that's great... I think. Anyways I really
    like your fic and hope you update tomorrow. Good luck with
    your cold. And the fic people keep mentioning, Indago is at
    this author's page: http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/authors.php?no=25749
    It's really good and if you're enjoying writing this, you'll love
    reading this. And your in luck the author just started the sequel.

    Mashell

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  • From ANON - Socrates\' Playmate on November 01, 2005
    "Indago" is a very popular story like yours, where Harry's a submissive and Snape and Draco are dominants and they're rare magical creatures. It's most likely because whereas your Snape is 'Superei,' "Indago"'s Snape is 'Supero...' It's really good. There are a lot of similarities between your fic and Indago, so I can easily see why some people are crying foul. Yours is a really good story, but resembles it quite a bit. Actually, there was an influx of magical creature!Harry and Draco stories after Indago came out and it was annoying. Though yours is nearly like it, there are aspects that make it much different. Keep at it anyhow, it's good!
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  • From ANON - lilith on November 01, 2005
    Indago by LdDurham is a great fic, but I like yours better. Your Harry especially, he has more spirit. Keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Storm on November 01, 2005
    Great chapter. Hope you feel better soon. Great chapters and I can't wait to see Snape go all monkey shit on the other Superei's ass. Very interesting and yes smut and a little plot never hurt anyone. Hope you do update soon! (shameless begging for an update tonight inserted here) Oh and after you get done with this story (I think you should wait until your finished so that it doesn't affect your story) You should definitely read 'Indago' by LdDurham and her WIP 'Indago: Reborn'. Absolutely Great stories and there are similarities between the stories but if you haven't read it you should wait so that it doesn't influence your story later on. Can't wait for an update. Keep up the great work.

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  • From ANON - tessa3 on November 01, 2005
    DUDE!!! the last 2 chapters.. *gives 2 thumbs up* keep on keepin on.. I read INDAGO!!! that fic was fuckin intense *nodding* i was pissed 3 ways from sunday..and yet i was happy at times.. and i cried.. DUDE!!! it was fuckin insane!!!! it was FUCKIN GHREAT!!!!! just like this fic.. but yours is awesome.. Indago is GREAT!!!! i haven't read INdago: Reborn becuase i am afraid that i will start bitchin and getting real pissy at the characters *nodding* but anyhoo.. its a drarry pairing if you want to chk it out

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  • From ANON - T-chan on November 01, 2005
    Pst, pst, Riffraff... Look here: adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/authors.php?no=25749
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on November 01, 2005
    INDAGO is a Harry/Draco fic that has Snape and Draco as Doms and Harry as a sub. But he is married to Draco. It kind of goes along the lines of your story. But I like your story better.
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  • From ANON - SarryMatts on November 01, 2005
    Great Fic! in fact, they all are ^_^ Make it as dark as you want cos this is one of the best I've read
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  • From ANON - Remmy on November 01, 2005
    *Chocolate* *Snape* and *Update you fucking cow before we go insane!!!!*


    o_o Just kidding. ^.^ I love this story! It's just.... amazing. Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Lesa on November 01, 2005
    Hi,

    I'm enjoying this fic so hope you continue to write. I only just found it so read it all in one go. I prefere stories where Harry and others are dark, wether a creature or just through circumstances. Makes for much more excitement in a story and allows it to go where canon based can't. It reminds me a lot of indago actually. It could do with some slight beta work, but it's not enough to stop me from enjoying the read.


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  • From ANON - Roses on November 01, 2005
    You haven't lost everyone, because I'm still avidly awaiting the next chapter. I just don't usually review when nothing's wrong with the story. Good work and keep writing damn it!
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  • From ANON - deb on November 01, 2005
    hey glad u updated, i wont be back on for days! hope i come back to some good chapters, another thing i have an idea for a story for you. harry after fifth year tries to commit suicide, he doesnt Dumbldore got temporary gaurdianship of him and sighed harry up to be given to a master and be a submissive, Dumbldore tells Snape to be visious with harry, to get him under control to scared to try and kill himself or go against them. Snape does just that, but when harry is at breaking point his occlumancy sheilds wavier and crash, snape ends up going into harry's mind loooking for somthing to get on him, what he finds horrorfies him, Dumbldore had told snape to do it becuase harry was spoiled thats why he agreed, he was not that bad a few slaps and kicks there and made him have sex. When he finds out, he heals harry, and they talk about everything keeping nothing out, but he offers harry to stop this contract but harry doesnt want to, he realises he needs grounded wants to be there, in the rooms he is a submissive not famous harry potter and thats how he wants to be, they kill the dark lord and they leave hogwarts
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  • From ANON - gyspy on November 01, 2005
    MORE PLEASE!!! I love this story, hate the cliffies though. Does Dumbledore know about Severus? Or Harry? Is Lucius going to have a juicy role? I love the bad boys, and really love it when Harry is written as somewhat less than a vanilla, golden boy. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Denise on November 01, 2005
    You haven't scared me off!
    The first thing I do when I sign on is to check if you have updated.
    This is as wonderful as your previous stories and
    I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2005
    wow... who would have thought another would actually go to Hogworts... you continue to amase, keep updating
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