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Reviews for Guilty as Sin

By : harriet
  • From thyladyx on July 06, 2010
    wow...amazing fic. Draco was a little annoying at times ubt you cant really blame him after what you had him go through. I cant wait to read more of your work
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  • From KW200910 on March 25, 2010
    I wish you had done something when harry first saw the baby. Anything would have been nice. I liked this story but it is seriously in need of a beta. the fact that i kept reading says alot about the story line if you ask me. It's like you only care about the plot and not the grammar/spelling. It does get difficult to read at some point because sentences don't make sense and such. But i still loved it and i though it was very original and i couldn't wait to read it while i was at work. LOL. I'm reading The Friday Boy now...
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  • From ANON - lindasek on January 23, 2010
    Loved it, simply loved it - read the whole thing together, havent slept in 24 hours and start work in three but girl! that story was worth it! Kinda feel sorry for draco, after all snape simply took him for convinience. the names of boys though, paris, artremis, they sound like girls' names!
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  • From ANON - Shiny on January 13, 2010
    *o* this is hot shit right here XD ilu
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  • From ANON - Amy hobbes on January 04, 2010
    Love it!
    I'm reading through your stuff. It's all so wonderful!
    Keep up the good work
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  • From TheQueenAnne on October 26, 2009
    Loved it! So well done and really interesting creature. The Dom/sub stuff was delicious!
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  • From SourApple on October 20, 2009
    omg. i love it! it was very dark and beautiful and sweet all at the same time. all the other hp/ss/dm creature fics iv read so far dont compare.
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  • From ANON - Chuffed4Angst on October 05, 2009
    Well done! You cast an interesting spin on the Harry/Severus/Draco dynamic in this one. You say you hate Draco in this and I am surprised. He seemed a little OC to me in the beginning - a little too nice. But I couldn't fault his insecurities in their relationship because he was right, Severus did hold him in second place to Harry. That would have to be hard.
    Thanks for a great read.
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  • From ANON - Luckyone on September 27, 2009
    Can I just say, I LOVED it. Read it all in one sitting. Loved literally evrything about it. Highlight was definately the way Draco was portrayed. In fics he tends to be either an arsehole or a lovey dovey baby, and this fic was just PERFECT. However, I do have a bit of a thing about grammar. A lot in this fic you write things like Hogwart's and Evan's. You only need an apostrophe when using the posessive or in place of 'noun is,' for example, for Hogwarts is you might say Hogwarts's. For a word that already ends in 's' as in this example, two 's's are needed, either side of an apostrophe. Also watch your 'your, you're.' Usually they are good but occasionally they waver.

    I'm sure you know all this and are just tired, so please forgive the lecture! Just thought it was worth noting. It didn't impair my enjoyment of this fic, however. It was all scrumptious. *Skips off to read more of your fics*
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  • From ANON - Evening12 on July 31, 2009
    Loved it!!! I will definetly check out your other stories. You should also check out the story Indago...this is the link for it. http://archive.skyehawke.com/story.php?no=8094

    I think you would like it.

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  • From ANON - celestlyn on June 25, 2009
    I really wasn't sure I was going to like this fic. It's the first of your work I've read and I may read more. I say may, because you did say that you don't normally have happy endings. I have to confess, I normally don't read dark fics. My own preference, I guess. I figure there's enough sadness and misery in life without going all goth and purposely surrounding myself in depressing stuff. I try to read stuff that at least has a good ending. Never death fics. So.... with that said, I really did like the story. I liked the end very much. Even though it wasn't all fluffy, it was obvious that they were content. The plot was good and the way it all played out was really different. Just when I thought I knew what was going to happen, it went another way.

    Good job with the characters, too. It's hard to get it right and keep them in character. It was weird seeing Harry and Draco as submissive though, because they were anything but in canon. You tied up all of the loose ends well and the whole thing flowed nicely.

    That was the pros. Now for just a couple of cons. There were quite a few spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. You should have someone beta for you. It's just another pair of eyes that often see things that you might miss. Commas! Use them. (Sorry, I was an English major.)

    All in all, a very good read.

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  • From ANON - DeminiSSS on April 16, 2009
    I love this story so much this is my 10th time reading it. :)
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  • From ANON - Fate-Angel on November 05, 2008
    That was a very well written fic.

    You managed to give it a lot of emotion
    without letting it become too dark and depressing.

    Perfect balance between pleasure and
    pain between Severus and his inferei.

    I enjoyed the light and happy ending.
    Good work as always.
    =^-^=
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  • From PrettyMassacre on October 15, 2008
    I have to say that I really loved this story and that you are amazing :)
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  • From ANON - Mitch on September 26, 2008
    A sappy happy ending was not what I expected, but it worked fine. There was plenty of action/adventure/angst/smut earlier to balance the happily ever after bit.
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