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Reviews for Guilty as Sin

By : harriet
  • From ANON - Mitch on September 26, 2008
    The warning at the beginning of ch. 55 is very off-putting. I can't imagine that anyone would stop reading at that point, since the story is so good, so I'm not sure why you stop the flow of the story to tell us that the ending will be horrible but not as horrible as you wanted it to be. I wish you'd let the story stand or fail on its own merits.

    You're a terrific storyteller, but I'm curious if you, "write," with voice recognition software. Your vocabulary is quite extensive and expressive, although the spellings and pseudo-homonyms seem a bit odd, as if someone is taking dictation and using random apostrophes. Please do not waste your creative time on proofreading this. There are plenty of volunteer betas who would love to work with such an amazing story. Spend your time using your talent to create more stories for your grateful fans.

    I didn't start writing these down till the end of the story,
    so a lot of them won't be listed here.
    feign, foreign
    tomb, tome
    wreathe, writhe
    loose, lose
    root, rut
    apperate, apparate
    apperating, apparating
    your, you're
    less, lest
    lessen, lesson
    riffs, rifts
    manor, manner
    to, too
    losing, loosing
    baited, bated
    Aurors, Auror's
    looser, loser
    idea, ideal


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  • From ANON - BloodSugarrr on August 24, 2008
    *review for part 12* Gosh.. I love this fic so much but .. well, I hate Harry/Draco. Wish it could be only Harry/Snape. ehh Still .. lovely.. ugh
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  • From pontaloon on August 22, 2008
    that was an absolutely amazing creature fic. all of the others i've read have either been nice and fluffy where Snape and Harry are suddenly in love despite having hated eachother for... forever! and it's all touchy feely. either that or its dark and everyone dies and i'm left thinking "well shucks, life really does blow. why live on?". but this one is right in the middle. the main characters have a happy ending despite the casualties (i mean, i like Lucius normally but in this case he just had to go)
    there's also a perfect balance between pervy, gory, sad, happy, cute and WAFF. i cant even begin to fathom how you managed that!
    i have to say that its refreshing to see a submissive Draco. i know that in HarryxDraco fics, Draco is usualy dominant and even in threesomes where those two are concerned, Draco still is a top (at least for harry). i love how in this case Draco is equally as submissive as Harry in front of Snape is not more so. thats good shit!
    ok, all this ranting is just to say that i absolutely adored this story (my attention didnt even stray once! which is something that tends to happen if the story is more then 10 chapters and this one was 57ch!) and there just arent enough of them out there! *adds to recommended reading*
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  • From SirenSkywalker on August 20, 2008
    oh wonderful!!!!! I loved love loved it. Harry seems to be a powerful sponge neh? Great job i really enjoyed it.
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  • From on August 19, 2008
    Nice! It's even better the second time through. ^^
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  • From ANON - Angel of Immortality on August 08, 2008
    I agree! I totally hated Draco! Do you think that some day you could redo the story but leave it with just Harry and Sev? I mean I loved the story and I have read it all the way through a couple of times, but really don't like draco being with Harry and Severus in this story, and normally I love the three of them together. I feel like I was waiting for him to get killed so that the other two would be left in peace the entire story. None the less, I really enjoyed the story and thanks for writing it.

    Yours,
    Angel

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  • From blackjaz on August 07, 2008
    This is a really good story, and it might just be me but I do not shudder, wince nor think it any bit strange what you have written. What you have created is something that has been beautifully written and just show the darker side of what the human mind can think of and yet at the same time it is not as dark or as terrifying as some of histories mad-men(/women). There will always be worse and that is what you show, although I belive it is not as 'gory' as you say, but then again I do love history.
    Love your story and am looking forward to reading the rest of your works.
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  • From ANON - RD Wind on July 26, 2008
    YOu know == a lot of this reminds me of Indago. I am NOT accusing you of plagerism, i loved that story! I just have visions of that story as i read this one.
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  • From ANON - IrnBruOrDeath on July 24, 2008
    Another flawless story!

    I just love your Snape, he's always so deliciously devious.

    And I lay my obsession with Snarry firmly at your feet. Along with offerings of Tappioca Pudding and a plushy Potions Master.
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  • From jaimie on July 18, 2008
    wait wait!! WTF?!! we never get to find out what Snape's kink is?!! *pouts*

    aside from that, really great story! Read it all in one night too :] *looks at the clock* crap O.o
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on June 10, 2008
    Story was bloody great!
    (Draco isn't my favourite, can't pinpoint the reason to you, sorry)

    You could have killed Dumbledore if you wanted, he sure had it coming!

    But your story is really great!

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  • From ANON - rons_pigwidgeon on May 29, 2008
    I have to tell you that I rather enjoy this story, rather more than I thought I would, actually. I am excited to read the darker parts, when what happens during sex is fully described rather than just alluded to. I do have a bit of difficulty reading this, though. Not because I can not handle the subject matter, but because it is clear to me that you do not have a beta, and though your writing is quite excellent, your grammar and punctuation is not exactly stellar. It appears to me that you do not always read back what you have typed, and in many instances, that second look is necessary to avoid subject/verb disagreement as well as the occasional extraneous/incorrect word usage and the complete lack of commas. For every one comma I see, there should be four or five.

    Please don't take this the wrong way, I'm not trying to insult you. As I said before, your writing really is stupendous. You just need a bit of grammar clean-up. I would be more than willing to help, if you would like.
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  • From En4cerMax on May 26, 2008
    I just want to tell you that I have read this story 3 times already and it's one of my favorites. "Guilty as Sin" and "How Severus Spends his Summer Hols" are the best two stories that I have ever come across. When I visited my friends in Texas, I printed your entire story out and took it with me for the plane trip. I just got done reading this again in 3 days. You have such a great story line and kept it lively. Keep up the GREAT job and hope to see more like this from you soon!
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  • From ANON - greywalker999 on May 19, 2008
    OMG! I just read this entire thing in like the span of 3 days and I am just....blown away. This story was so brilliantly put together and captivating. You were so wonderful in the way you put so much passion and kept to the true voices of the characters throughout the entire thing, it's simply amazing. Thank you so much for posting this, I absolutely loved it and am now definitely an avid fan of your work. Simply beautiful is what Guilty as Sin is, this is one of the best stories I've read on this site.
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  • From ANON - jojo on May 14, 2008
    love this story evertime i read it... it just sticks in my mind as one of the most solid au creature threesom (hot) mpreg fanfictions of all time! lol...siriusly! snapes awesome..harrys great...and ive never been a fan of draco but like in many of your fanfictions you bring harry and draco together wonderfully...believably...unlike so many other stories where its oneday all ron and hermy and then all of a sudden dracos like best buds..yay? but it really was well written, even with little stumbles along the way, you have a nice pace and it showes in the fact that even like my fifth time reading it im still in tempo with the peice even though i know whats coming next. Thanks again, i hope you finish your other fanfictions! come back to us!
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