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Reviews for Waterballoon Fight

By : severusgurl666
  • From ANON - Fleurke on October 23, 2005
    It's a nice plotbunny, but you should consider working it out a bit. It's way to short to obtain the fun intended.
    It's also necessary to use proper quotation marks and paragraphs. There are tons of papers, books and such written on 'How to write', including a lot of interesting things online. I think you should consider reading a few of those, they'll make clear what I try to tell here. The spell Malfoy should use is called Accio instead of Aicco, there's this great thing on the net called the HP lexicon where you can check names of spells, potions and such if you're not sure about how to write them.
    Finally, if you want to try larger works, it's a must for every fanfiction writer to have backup from a beta-reader, they can point out and/or correct your mistakes before you publish your piece.

    Good Luck!


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