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Reviews for MUGGLE MAGIC

By : Sharline
  • From ANON - Trickie Woo on July 26, 2006
    At last she showed some common sense and gave in to what her heart and her body kept trying to tell her and her mind refused to see.
    I stand by what I said in my last review, he does care for her, more than he knows or would ever admit to himself or anyone else. He proved that when he knocked on her door and left himself open to give her comfort or whatever else she wanted that he could provide for her. That was remeniscent to me of Bridget Jones going to the New Years Day party at the Darcy's and holding herself wide open to rejection when she spoke privately to Mark. Fortunately Mark took care of all his loose ends and went back to make good on her offer. I'm a hopeless romantic when it come to literary characters I care about so I'm hoping your hints about the next chapter mean that it's just as romantic as it was with Bridget & Mark.
    I've had people tell me that I have psychic abilities, but I think it's more that I have strong intuition. The closest I've come to being psychic is sensing people from the past were there in some ancient churches I visited in England, and in some church yards in Virginia. On a bus tour to Normandy years ago there was a feeling of being pulled, that I was being drawn irrisistably home that got stronger and stonger as the bus got closer to Normandy. When we got there I did feel like I had come home. But that is very different from her psychic ability.
    I like your way of giving both viewpoints, rather than confusing I find it gives me insight to the characters.
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  • From ANON - Trickie Woo on July 23, 2006
    I read all 8 chapters tonight and I really like this story. The lemon was exquisite, but why didn't she do a full reading of him? She claims there was no trace of any feelings for her in his mind. She stopped her reading far too soon, she stopped with Lily's death. That was more than 11 years ago. Why didn't she search through the years afterwards, that's where the information is that Dumbledore wants and that's where she would find his true feelings about her. I'm sure his feelings for her are a lot deeper than just animal lust and had she taken the time to go further I think she would have found that her truly cared for her and is falling in love with her.
    Of course these are all rhetorical questions, if she had followed through all his memories to the present day there would probably be very little left of the story to tell. I have gotten hooked on your story, Cassidy, and the chemistry between Cassidy and Severus, so I will wait for your updates, please let me know when you do update.
    I do have a suggestion for you. In the sentence where she says to Jessica "I know that he wants normalcy...", I think 'normality' is a better word to convey just what she means. I saw a few minor errors as I read all 8 chapters, most of them were typos and a place where 'loose' is written and it should be 'lose'. You or your beta should go back and fix these. This story is too good to leave careless minor errors in it, they detract from the quality of your story and your writing and both of them are very good.
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on July 08, 2006
    Not the worst SI (self insertion) fic I've read, but it isn't an OFC by definition of such. As it is, this belongs in the "Mary Sues" catagory. Not bad though for a first timer, and I will give that credit where it is due. The hopping around of the first person view between characters does detract from a decent SI fic. Songfic also needs to be added to the rated listings.
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  • From MissLizzie on July 06, 2006
    All I can say is: wow...
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  • From MissLizzie on July 06, 2006
    Thank you so much for sending me an email to tell me that you updated!! Squee!! It has indeed been some time since we were able to do something, and I had almost given up hope! But things are back on track, I updated my other Fic The Winter Guest (Celebrity FanFiction dedicated to Alan Rickman) and am currently brewing on a new Ginny/Snape fic perhaps the next chapter in Ginny Works Magic...who know!
    And you've updated too! Yes! Tonight I will take the time and completely re-read your story, it's been a while since I read it. Anyway, thanks for letting me know!!!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on March 13, 2006
    This is a wonderfully different story. It's also pretty funny. You did leave us with a cliffie though so I hope you plan to remedy that situation soon.
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  • From ANON - Myskit on February 05, 2006
    This is a great fic, I'm really enjoying reading it. Not entirely sure why she's in the shower in her underwear, but I'm not really going to question it. It goes well with the story, and paints a very vivid picture. I can't wait for the next chapter! I love that she can actually defend herself even though she's a muggle. Usually people who write muggleSnape fics make the muggle chic completely helpless in every sense of the word. I like that she can fight back so she can be Snape's equal instead of needing to be saved all the time. I'm eagerly awaiting more! *grabs popcorn*
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  • From ANON - random reviewer on February 03, 2006
    please update this story soooooooon.
    please
    From
    Draguna
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  • From ANON - Rapture on January 30, 2006
    This an awesome story so far, I can't wait till she really gets under his skin!!
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  • From ANON - Black Feathers on January 21, 2006
    Wow, I was just about to leave a review saying 'this is great, please write a new chapter soon', but you already have...so... this is great, please write a new chapter soon! It is whimsical, but you seem to have kept Snape's character nicely.
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  • From ANON - Aaliyah on January 18, 2006
    Great Story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From MissLizzie on January 07, 2006
    Gawwwd, that was good! I liked that...it had been a while since I checked if you'd updated, and finally here it is... You really are a very good writer, I love it how you give little hints of Snape thoughts...very good!
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  • From chaeche on January 02, 2006
    I love it so far. A great insertion of a muggle into the wizarding world and a very characteristic Snape. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Draguna on December 15, 2005
    omg you have to update this as soon as you possible can!!!!!
    this was AWESOME!!!!
    i LOVE this story!!!
    update soon.
    from
    Draguna
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  • From MissLizzie on November 28, 2005
    Mmmm, nice story line, I love Snape a little softer around the edges. Not too soft, of course, but like this he is perfect!
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