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Reviews for Furry Magic

By : neichan
  • From ANON - ice owl on December 15, 2005
    I still want to know what this triad is for?
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 15, 2005
    That was simply eloquent!
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  • From ANON - LazySnake on December 15, 2005
    Wow...I'm so amazed by your dedication to this fic. You update almost daily. I love love love you.
    Hmm...I'm a bit disturbed by the idea of sharing lovers, maybe I'm a bit conservative but I understand from where Harry is coming from.
    However, in this story, it does not appall me so much that Lucius takes for granted that he is only loving the members of his pride and not cheating on his chosen. Maybe because of the setting, it made me see that perhaps culture has a lot to do with how one thinks. In my country there is a religion that allows polygamous marriage. I don't understand it though my friends has tried explaining it to me. How can one man love two or more people fairly and equally.
    Not to say this story is in the same context, but perhaps as you say, because they have been brought up to think that way and I have been brought up to think my way, what is wrong for me may not be for them.
    Enough of my rambling, sorry to review only now.
    Just got my lazy ass off to start reviewing all my favs.
    Keep up the good work ^__^

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  • From ANON - ice owl on December 15, 2005
    Draco and the boys huh? I think I like the idea of them togehter. What is the significance of a triad this time around?
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  • From ANON - lena on December 15, 2005
    I'm really really enjoying this story. It is one of the best I have ever read, ever, I'm not lying or exaggerating. I think your knowledge of the history of your own story is deep and it gives your story texture and wealth. I think you portray Harry very well and have developed the other sides to Lucius and Draco in depth. Please update soon and, if you will, answer the two following questions:

    Have you already or do you plan to write a sequel, prequel or coupling fic? Perhaps to show the time when Draco thought he might be king?
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  • From ANON - Varjo on December 15, 2005
    Going to an interesting direction there, you are. The ruling three and Harry? Now that would be very joiable. Exept, that Amrys has Severus. But an interesting idea still. Please, update soon again.
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  • From ANON - postgrl on December 14, 2005
    postpostpostpost!!!
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  • From ANON - TwoMinds on December 14, 2005
    I hope u are feeling better. And excellent chapter and I think it is great that u are so opened to other ppls ideas to the extent of letting ppl take ur plot. Personally I don't think there is much to improve. Well I guess the plot does run on a bit with no clear focus but it is still entertaining and a run on plot is much more desirable than the story ending; Cause then what would i have left to read. :'( :p
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  • From ANON - kieshar on December 14, 2005
    Personaly, I love where you have been going with this fic. So, if you are liking what you have writen so far, screw what everyone else thinks. My 2 cents. V(^o^)V
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 14, 2005
    Sorry you were in the hospital. Hope you're better with the holidays coming up!
    I think you should rename yourself the Queen of the Cliffie's. Balm of the king, indeed. Thanks for the update on Draco. It's good to know that he's still well and enjoying the attention of his bodyguards. Let's hope it's a boy. And let's hope Severes doesn't burn up with embarassment when he tries to explain to Draco what he's doing with Amerys.
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on December 14, 2005
    I have read as far as chapter 42 and I loved every single one of them. Truly amazing and very creative. I especially liked Snapes appearence in that last chapter. Very characteristic.
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  • From ANON - Reader on December 13, 2005
    Perfect.
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  • From ANON - mona on December 13, 2005
    Hi,
    I've read your story before - awhile ago - and I want to offer some criticism. I think the idea of the pride is great, very original and very well done, even if they are not exactly like a cat pride. (For example, cats swish their tails when they are angry or have a problem to decide between two alternatives, it has something to do with balance - they used the tail to balance while living on trees - its not terribly important, but perhaps you'd like to know)
    What bothers me, and has bothered me the first time I read is, is the number of straight characters in your story which suddenly turn gay. It would not matter if they were characters who are only straight in canon - but they are characters, which YOU explicitly described as straight. The part in which you described Dracos problems with the conception was wonderfull, but then you went and made him gay - this made the whole thing somewhat pointless. Why would he agonise so much about having sex with a male if he was gay, or even bisexual. He might be in denial, but why would he be, if he grew up with the pride? It would make more sense if he thought himself to be gay even if he wasn't, because he wants to belong to the pride so much. The other way around - sorry, it doesn't make sense.
    The same thing with Snape. And Tambyn. It appears as if you turned them gay on a whim, just to add some gay sex in the story, or... well, I don't know the reason, really. I think some straight characters would ameliorate your story, and especially the Snape/Amrys thing was superfluous. Interaction between straight and gay characters is interesting, because it adds some heterogeny in a story.
    And... well, I know this is a fantasy world and all, but straight persons don't suddenly turn gay because they have sex with the same gender... I would be very happy if this were the case, believe me. If you made your characters this way, you should have a very good reason, and I don't think you have.
    I know you wont change this story, its written, and I'm not one who thinks reviewers should influence the plot anyway. But perhaps, I don't know... perhaps you will edit some years in the future or write another story...
    I think this is something which makes a story which could have been very good merely average, and that is a bit sad, because, as I said before - you had some great ideas, and you have the talent to write them.

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  • From ANON - Sahira on December 13, 2005
    Awwwwwwww...HOT...Awwwwww...cute:) Snape's getting some;)Update:):):)
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  • From ANON - Quill on December 12, 2005
    heart heart heart!
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