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Reviews for Hermione the prostitute

By : Ajayrious
  • From N2Romance4life on August 30, 2009
    Please, please update quickly! I need to know what happens...pretty please with three cheeries on top!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 08, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 17, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Lorelai on July 13, 2006
    hmm... this is a weird but kinda cool story! hope snape will fuck her soon! i wanna know actually, u know it was written that when the guard put him inside hermione, she screamed. it's because she's a virgin and it hurt right? anyway, i wana know, does it really hurt? cos i'm a virgin (20 yrs old already!) and i need to know!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2005
    This could be an excellent story. You have my attention.
    You do need longer chapters, spaces between paragraphs, and better punctuation. It wouldn't hurt to include more information about the scene or her feelings.
    Try to improve. :-)

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  • From lckarlsson on November 23, 2005
    I know you say you haven't read the books, but even from watching the movies, you should be able to get a feel of their characters... I just don't see Hermione hungering for sex and willingly becoming a prostitute after being abused by the guards for two years... your story just doesn't seem believable.

    If Hermione was forced by circumstances to become a prostitute, it would make your story a lot more believable... she could be reluctantly intrigued by the thought of serving Snape, but she would definitely have a hard time admitting it to herself.

    Also, it would be nice if you put some more details into your story.

    Good luck with it.
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on November 21, 2005
    Evil cliffee! Please Update Soon!
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  • From ANON - Lady Wordsmith on November 21, 2005
    Please learn the art of proper punctuation, and the use of paragraphs.
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  • From ANON - cat on October 26, 2005
    okay this has potential but you need a few things
    longer chapter... definately
    and divide up your paragraphs with a blank line it will make it easier to read..

    hope you take my advice to heart cause i think this could be great
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  • From ANON - lola_lola on October 25, 2005
    Granger, Mudblood.
    story seems interesting although I think you can expand on how she got into prison and what it was like there.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2005
    This is potentially interesting, please write more :D
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