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Reviews for Only You Can Set Me Free

By : wizgrl14
  • From ANON - Devon on July 23, 2006
    Can't wait for another update.
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  • From ANON - Devon on July 23, 2006
    Lovin the Greek God names
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  • From ANON - Ladieraie on July 23, 2006
    I just read the review from D/H. Ignore that person. I put it this way...if you want to read professional writings, go to BooksaMillion and buy something. If you want to read just for fun and different veiw points, go to FanFictions. FanFiction sites ARE NOT for professional writers, even though some do add their works here. Practice makes perfect...so keep up the hard work. :)
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  • From ANON - Ladieraie on July 23, 2006
    I love this story...Harry's changes make more since now and I can understand where he is coming from. I am amazed that nothing was done to Ron & Hermionie for hurting Luna and Draco in the Owlery. Sure hope Ron "gets his" from trying to kill Draco this time. I want the whole pack to live together...I am a sucker for happy endings...so sue me! *giggles Can't wait to read more. If you have an "alert" list, please add me to it. Thanks. :)
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  • From ANON - D/H on July 22, 2006
    I skimmed through the first few chapters and i have to say, your dialogue is horrible and very amatuerish
    and very unsophisticated..

    You write for fun but couldn't you at least TRY to make the character's dialogue a little
    more believable and time/era related..I can't read this story of yours..It's just
    toooo bad!!

    Sorry to say..


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  • From ANON - ding on July 19, 2006
    this is a nice story i love the twist but come on urinating that just gross,and why is Ron being such a prat i would like you to kill him off please.maybe be harry,draco or even hermione couls kill Ron.Hang on make sure hermione kills Ron pleeaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
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  • From ANON - Debbie on July 18, 2006
    Hi

    Brillant Story and I would love to read the rest if they are available
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  • From ANON - darkshadowarchfiend on July 18, 2006
    You are so mean leaving me hanging like that. Oh, I really hope that Ron gets what's coming to him and Luscius ( did I spell that right?) gets his ass kicked!!!!!!!!
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  • From ladybahiya on July 17, 2006
    This is good so far, but I think Harry should stop calling Remus "Lupin" all the time, after all you have the man as his new godfather. It's not like Harry running around saying "Malfoy" all the time. Remus and Harry's relationship is like adopted father/son so the last name thing isn't working for me.

    But I do like the story so far.
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  • From Dr4g0nQu33n on July 17, 2006
    I love the fic. The idea's behind it are very original and different. Keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - HazelWolf on July 17, 2006
    Hmm... well, I just want to point out that Harry has two phoenixes, but still hasn't figured out that he can travel instantaneously by fire. On the other hand, kudos for the suspense. Oh, and pleeeeease dom!Harry, please, please, pleeeeease!!!

    ~Hazel
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  • From ANON - HazelWolf on July 13, 2006
    I wasn't paying that close of attention in the chapter where Harry got Helios, but why did he name him after the sun if the phoenix is coal black?

    ~Hazel
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  • From ANON - Amessis on June 19, 2006
    Aww Harry, why did he leave Draco behind!? I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Miss Jany on June 19, 2006
    hi. Lookin' wicked what you got up here, but as far as I know the levitating spell is "wingardium leviosa". HTH.
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  • From ANON - Argo on June 19, 2006
    I was very emotional and scaring chapter. And about Lupin, winning the fight? I can understand this. But I can't understand and accept his claiming Harry, "as his property".
    So right now, I HATE Lupin. I hate him, hate him, hate him! I hope Harry will return and break him And Harry can just leave the Lupin's pack and start his own, with Draco. He shouldn't stay in the pack, leader of which treating him "as his property". Just for that, I hope Harry will refuse Lupin and have his own way. He can do that.
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