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Reviews for Little Mischievous baby dragon

By : jaymclg
  • From on April 15, 2008
    Ooooh...I am so excited that you decided to update this fic.
    Can't wait to see what you've got coming up next.
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  • From DestinyDragon on March 19, 2008
    I love this story!!! Can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon.
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  • From Wendy on March 18, 2008
    Hey I like! Please continue.
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  • From Jan on March 18, 2008
    Great updates!

    Can't wait for chapter 11 ^_^

    Jan
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  • From SirStalkingwarrior on March 18, 2008
    yeah i was so happy wen i saw u updated chappies 9 and 10. awesome job with the fic. though im curios, wen will draco start to age. i mean are you going to make him age to a 17 year old in one shot once the 6 weeks are up?
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  • From alleycat88 on March 18, 2008
    Hey! Harry and draco bought each other the same necklace! Only opposites! Cute chapter!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 18, 2008
    Hmm. The boys got each other jewelry! Sooo need chapter 11!!!
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  • From SirStalkingwarrior on March 17, 2008
    wow awesome fic. plz update as soon as possible

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  • From alleycat88 on March 16, 2008
    heeee....Naughty Draco....nice chapter.
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  • From bananasforyou on March 16, 2008
    you said that youd recently reposted this. thats good i love it!
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  • From vanessaclarke on March 16, 2008
    Hey! This is the first time I've noticed this story and I'm glad I did. I'm only at chapter 4 but I can already tell that it's quite different from the usual stories where one of the boys is turned into a baby. I think you're doing really well. I do have one little piece of criticism though. It's really wordy. Just check this out:
    'adorable and handsome'
    'opinion and point of view'
    'gently and carefully'
    'obviously and without a doubt'
    'aware and informed'
    'joy and pleasure'
    'loathed and detested'
    'safe and wise'
    'rant and protests'
    'wife and mate's'
    Do you see the pattern? It seems like you're too indecisive to just pick and term so you stick in an 'and' and use both. Like all the time. These are just the examples off the top of my head from chapters 3-4. Synonyms give us a lovely variety of descriptive words to choose from. But I'd like to see you make a single choice. Saying both constantly gives the whole thing a sort of redundant air. Other than all the extra words, it flows well, the spelling and grammar are good and plot is working splendidly. You're doing a great job so keep it up! ^^
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  • From Slytherdor on March 16, 2008
    I abso - Positively- lutely Love this fic!!!
    I keep coming back to read it every now and then! You have made my day!
    Thank-you, Thank-you, Thank-you!!

    I look forward to your next update!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 16, 2008
    Fantastic!!! Soooo need chapter 9!
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  • From prettypinkpony on March 16, 2008
    Oh I love this. It is sooo damn cute. "No. not Malfoy. Dwaco" Priceless. I had a feeling Draco would still be concious undernaeth. The only critisisms I have is that the chapters are too short and aometimes the story is moving along too fast. Other than that this story and your writing style are amazing. I would have loved to hear what Draco was thinking the first time his nappy was changed and also are we gonna see Sirius and Remus? Please? Anyhoo add me to your mailing list for updates if you have one...

    noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au

    I can so imagine a baby Draco. Awwww
    Oh maybe when Draco and Harry get together Harry will become all clucky and want another baby to look after. 'hint hint'
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  • From bananasforyou on October 29, 2007
    i dont know the reason you gave this up but id like more if possible please!!!!:)
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