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Reviews for One Cold Morning

By : Nyxx
  • From Muggleman on December 27, 2005
    ok your a
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  • From ANON - Silky Sweet Satin on December 26, 2005
    Ley me tell you that one of my favorite characters are SNape, Harry and Draco. I liked your story vut it did make me rethink him in some of my stories. they aren't on this site as of yet but they will be soon. It was good.
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  • From ANON - denise on December 25, 2005
    serves him right! I was soooo pissed when he hurt her!! but anyway i love teh story it is great. I think you have the potential to be a GREAT writer! but i have one thing to complain about, dont stop with this as a one shot, continue it, i would really like it. you could write about her time away from severus, and his attempts to get her back and at teh end you can decide if she will ever come back or not.....think about it and remeber i would LOVE it if you wrote more!!!
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  • From ANON - snapes_witch on December 25, 2005
    Well-written one shot, don't think I could take more of this Snape! Thank goodness she left him; I was afraid she wouldn't.
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  • From ANON - auntbecky on December 25, 2005
    I'm with you about Severus. Something is going on that we don't know about yet. My feeling is that he told Albus about the Unbreakable Vow and Albus made him go through with it anyway. Still, you can never tell with JK. She can be a cold-hearted b#tch sometimes. Anyway, really liked your story.
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  • From ANON - courtney on November 28, 2005
    LOVED THE STORY!
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  • From ANON - jess on November 16, 2005
    I don't mean to leave a flame, but that was mean,it had no happy ending, in the summary you are misleading, really you need to have a warning, a lot of stories had rape but not husband/wife. Wat was the point?
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  • From ANON - Liza on November 11, 2005
    Omigod... so good! You should really write more to this... Snape can't be all alone!

    *hugs Snape*
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  • From ANON - Rikki on November 04, 2005
    I thought it was very well done. and would like to see more, please.
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  • From ANON - Intrigued on November 02, 2005
    wow. that was powerful. i actually cried. lol. i loved it. you should continue it just so we can find out if she goes back to him or not. it's cool if you dont. we can make up our own after life kinda story thing. yeah. anyways great story.
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  • From ANON - elh on November 02, 2005
    I can not picture severus raping a woman for the hell of it but I can absolutely picture him flying into a rage and not listening to any kind of reason and then doing something violent for sure.
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  • From ANON - ~Rhiannon on November 01, 2005
    Although quite dark, your fic was very well written and emotionally evocative.

    I do have a question... You wrote:

    The idea for this was originally spawned by his actions at the end of HBP, where he physically harms an emotionally distraught innocent for the first time ever.

    To what do you refer? I fear I may have missed something. If you have the time could you drop me an e-mail and enlighten me?

    Thanks!
    ~Rhiannon
    snarkytheraven@comcast.net

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  • From ANON - mazza on November 01, 2005
    wow thats amazing!
    cant wait for you next update!
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  • From ANON - y on November 01, 2005
    I really don't understand how she actually could talk to him after that. She should've just left as quickly as possible, not let him hug and kiss her after. I'm a real fan of SS/HG, and the rape was a bit sad to read, but it was the fact that she actually was prepared to forgive him that really shocked me the most. That was very un-like Hermione. Otherwise, good plot.
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  • From ANON - Aurora on November 01, 2005
    I have to agree with your A/N's asessment of Snape but this was extraordinarily well done anyhow! I can't wait to read more of what you write!
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